Before Age Five Lost

I ran after the balloon man, red, blue yellow and purple too.
I suddenly see the car bumper, which did turn my forehead blue.

Rushed in his car, I feel my mother’s warm hands, holding true.
Taken to the hospital, family, doctors and nurses having no clue,

X-rays taken watched day and night, I remember only a faint view.
At the age of five, the first and only memory of what or who.

Pictures of many things before that age, I have seen nothing I knew.
What happened, when my head hit that car, and what did I do.

Memories, before the age of five, taken that mid morning day, flew.
However, un-hurt in any other way, I continued and grew.

The memories I lost, I sometimes miss, but have since bid adieu.
Just maybe this happening was destiny, for my old mind to construe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 6/4/2009 9:20:00 PM
The rhymes are awesome ... but they are not isolated ... they serve the purpose of a genius to carry the flow of the write ... love it!
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Date: 6/1/2009 4:28:00 PM
Sounds like a crazy day to me. The rhyme works well to convey your thoughts. I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 5/31/2009 9:05:00 AM
It must have been hard to lose those memories, Cecil. So many wonderful things happen in the preschool years. I like the way you presented your story in rhyme. Thank you for sharing this. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/30/2009 8:57:00 AM
aww a great poem, I am glad you came out of it ok, I got hit by a car once I was knocked off a push bike and my head hitt he windscreen and I bounced on the bonet then on tot he ground unconcious but I was just fine, the car took off and the police said i was very lucky I did not go through the windscreen, I Love how God looks after us and keeps us from harm, God bless you from diane
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