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Sad, useless, all alone that's all I use to moan crying tears of blood smearing my name like mud a lonely shadow in the corner I was but a lowly mourner then one day you appeared and wiped away my painful tears you said you loved me then gave a nod I asked who are you you said "YOUR GOD!"

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Date: 4/28/2013 10:36:00 PM
Hi Sierra, wow... what an ending "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/26/2013 7:59:00 PM
Sierra, ;-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/26/2013 7:08:00 AM
Sierra-- this poem gave me 'goosebumps'-- I have felt this same Love in the midst of feeling isolated. Beautiful words to descibe a beautiful moment.
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Date: 4/26/2013 1:59:00 AM
I sooo love this poem...welcome to poetry soup!!! Please keep writing...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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