Before

Sad, useless, all alone
 that's all I use to moan
 crying tears of blood
 smearing my name like mud
a lonely shadow in the corner
I was but a lowly mourner
then one day you appeared 
and wiped away my painful  tears
you said you loved me then gave a nod
I asked who are you 
you said "YOUR GOD!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 28, 2013 at 10:36 PM
Hi Sierra, wow... what an ending "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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April 26, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Sierra, ;-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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April 26, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Sierra-- this poem gave me 'goosebumps'-- I have felt this same Love in the midst of feeling isolated. Beautiful words to descibe a beautiful moment.
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April 26, 2013 at 1:59 AM
I sooo love this poem...welcome to poetry soup!!! Please keep writing...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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