John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo Poet Rhyme

Befor There Was You

Befor you  i felt the emptyness  and cold.
The  sting reflected by thoose who  
had grown bitter and old.

In desperation at times we cling to that which we 
hold dear.
But  passion warms the soul.
And love  does erase the fear.

Befor there was you I never really knew me.
when were lost in depression.
At times we never truely see.

It's a struggle im willing to endure.
My heart is lost in a ocean.
Stricken by a beautiful sickness for which there
is no cure.

love is like a mist  that covers the ground with dew.
Emptyness  was my life.
Befor there was you.

Dedicated To the other half of my heart  
Julie Loveless

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Barbara Gorelick October 19, 2009 at 4:35 PM Lucky Julie Loveless...thank you for the soup mail..keep in touch. BG

Carolyn Devonshire October 19, 2009 at 9:09 AM Yes, John, "love does erase the fear." Without love, the empty feeling can make us "bitter." Once we find love, we have a new perspective on life. What a moving tribute to Julie! Great work! Love, carolyn

Charmaine Chircop October 18, 2009 at 5:27 PM beautiful tribute to the woman of your life--beautiful--Charma

Julie Loveless October 18, 2009 at 5:21 PM aww honey, this is a beautifull write. Love you.