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hope at least a few puns can be found in this poem. At least I had fun trying!!

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A Jewel beetle I did meet one day. What a gem was she with her sparkling way. Another beetle I’d been pining for . . . the Mountain Pine beetle was easy to adore. The Pinching beetle, also as Stag beetle is known. It’s no wonder that he goes to parties all alone. The Longhorn beetle has a crazy look. But he’s no steer. He's one I will never cook! Goliath beetle had one night a fight with the beetle called Hercules. Oh, what a sight. Carpet beetle tripped them by getting underfoot. She’s the one on whom our money we ought to have put. The beetle called Feather Horned sure gave me a tickle. Hide beetle hid from me; that one is so fickle. The beetle know as Skin was horrible as sin, always bugging me, yes, she got under my skin. Water beetle – for swimming has a yen, I wonder if she gets thirsty now and then. My favorite of beetles though is sweet Ladybug. Always so polite, she gives my skin a hug. March 14, 2023 For Margarita Lillico's Pun Fun Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/16/2023 9:33:00 AM
A fun/cute write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 3/15/2023 9:38:00 AM
Beetle mania, right enough. Ladybugs must be the Hollywood stars of the beetle world.
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Date: 3/15/2023 6:45:00 AM
This is amazing, Andrea:) and you won't believe it, but my captcha is PUN:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/15/2023 12:35:00 PM
well, that makes me feel good. haha
Date: 3/15/2023 3:02:00 AM
I would never expect a poem on a beetle. But you did it. Hugs
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Date: 3/15/2023 2:56:00 AM
Totally delightful! And informative! Who would of thought so much poetry in beetles?! I think, you could make poetry out of most anything. Great, enjoyable read.
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Date: 3/15/2023 1:57:00 AM
It seems you have gotten the bug here Andrea Great rundown on types of them, I do like the Ladybug or Ladybird as its known in Britain.'
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Date: 3/14/2023 10:18:00 PM
Great fun Andrea! entomology 101! I remember just after a tornado ripped thru Itasca St Park (headwaters of Mississippi, history says, but I have been one lake further where Chief Ozawindib said was the source) the scourge of HUGE horned beetles were feeding on dying red pines...we camped (me n' my girls) amidst them...they were frightening but harmless to humans!
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Date: 3/14/2023 9:22:00 PM
What a fun read. Andrea, you’re an amazing poet. So talented. :)
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Date: 3/14/2023 5:49:00 PM
I'll bet this one took a little research. very well done, Andrea. Reads like a winner to me:)
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Date: 3/14/2023 3:21:00 PM
I found the humor stimulating my thinking cap to try to figure them out. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/14/2023 1:44:00 PM
Lovely start to my day with this bit of fun! So adroit! Elizabeth
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Date: 3/14/2023 1:41:00 PM
no wonder he goes to parties all alone, hahaha I loved that, good luck to you! I love all the puns and a great title
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