Bee's Kiss - Tb

Bee kisses Rose; 
Worm opposes;
He knows Bee’s drunk.
 

*A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 4, 2020)

Nov. 27, 2020
Than-Bauk Me Poetry Contest 
Contest sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 12/7/2020 2:31:00 PM
Thanks for the smile Newton, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2020 3:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for the lovely comment and the congrats!!
Date: 12/5/2020 8:56:00 PM
Such fun Newton! A bee drunk on natures fermented nectar! Congratulations on your win with this very witty poem.
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Date: 12/6/2020 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam, for this great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 12/5/2020 5:11:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Drunk on nectar gone bad. Ha~ Sara
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Date: 12/5/2020 5:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your visit and the lovely comment!!
Date: 12/5/2020 3:58:00 AM
Dear Newton Arch, Great writing.Congratulation on your win in the contest. May you be well and happy...!
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Date: 12/5/2020 5:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Loving Kindness, for your visit and the congrats!!
Date: 12/4/2020 6:12:00 PM
Hahaha! Good one! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/4/2020 8:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker, for your visit and the congrats!!
Date: 12/4/2020 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/4/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your visit and the congratulations!!
Date: 12/4/2020 2:27:00 PM
Hi Newton, Lol! This is really funny. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/4/2020 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis, for this great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 12/4/2020 1:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Newton. Hope that bee has sobered up by now. Laughter and Light, Gershon
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Date: 12/4/2020 2:00:00 PM
Sure, he is, Gershon!! Thank you so much for your revisit, great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 12/4/2020 12:31:00 PM
Love the humor, Newton. Very clever! Love it! Congratulations on your win in my contest.. Stay well my friend. All the best.. Charlie
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Date: 12/4/2020 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charles, for the great comment and the congratulations!!
Date: 11/29/2020 2:37:00 PM
Ha, ha! Never thought of a bee that way... Interesting idea: drunk on honey! ~ G.L. in the contest, Newton. ~ Buzzy the Bee
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for this impressively great comment!!
Date: 11/28/2020 2:35:00 AM
This will probably end up with a garland of flowers around its neck and a gold cup.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/28/2020 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for lovely comment!!
Date: 11/27/2020 6:41:00 PM
oh how CUTE this is!!!
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 11/27/2020 8:18:00 AM
Drunk on love I'm sure Newton, lovely write, gl in the contest
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/27/2020 11:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Pixie, for this lovely comment!!
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