Notes About The Poem

06/ 12/ 25


First Place

Shaped Haiku

syllable count 5-7-5

Contest by JCB Brul

bees hiku

              u              y              m m
     h  a       g  h  t          h u            i n  g
                                                                     e    e
                                                                b              s
                v  i
    m o o         n              a             e           a        ^                      r
                            g               n   t        n  n         ^        < >       f       e             y  
                                                                               ^                               e   l          ¢>
            
    
        w i t h  ~ w~a~v~e~s~ ~   o f                     b
                                                        m          d         ~ r               z~e`~
                                                             i   l                    ~e ~e~          
                                                                   
                                                             

                                          
       
                               

    w i t h      w~a~v~e~s ~~~ ~~  o f  ~~~~m i l d     b -r- e-e-z-e  ~ ~ ~
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mysore Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 6:41 PM
buzzing it is, lovely dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
Fowler Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Perfect Anisha. Congratulations! :)
Brul Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Wow, you did a ton of hardwork here! Congratulations. ^___^ JCB
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