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Summer spring bright colors, smells, flowers blooming welcome feast Amongst these bees so irresistibly attracted to sugary nectar A thought occurs to me, to see these little buzzing specters What kind of journey , these perfect pollinators wander Antennas smell and measuring flight, zipped away to honey Bees bobbed among the blossoms, sip the rosy dew swoony Blushing flowers shall rise upward towards the sky scents carried upon the lazy breeze Pollen on their body, wings, and as they flit Nestling inside blooms of fields, gardens, and budding trees Fertilizing egg cells to make more seeds as they knit Summer springs our new young queen bee that has been wooed With winter reserve of honey and pollen she hibernates As she emerges from her nest preened vibrating her flight muscles to generate heat Her colony ready with food to rearing the rest of the brood Worker bees huddled around her to protect and keep her warm Like a golden yellow sea of brown bands wave their bodies to scare off rude predators Visits of the bees help preserve and spread Much of the existence to fields, gardens, and our natural forest To detach the bees from the nature would mean The demise of countless species of flowers and plants that we fail to appreciate 9/27/2016
Poetry Contest : Bees Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton antenna, waves, sky, breeze, nectar, and pollen

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Date: 10/2/2016 10:15:00 AM
Watching these tireless workers of God every day on my roof garden I have to say that your poem does justice to them! We humans owe them our existence for without their pollination we would have been extinct long ago! Marvelous poem in beauty and content. Absolutely a seven. Goof luck for you deserve to be the winner dear friend, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/2/2016 11:24:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much for reading, Demetrios. Hugs
Date: 9/30/2016 11:16:00 PM
Hi Eve, You penned a well written informational write. Great imagery as well. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -)Alexis
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Date: 9/30/2016 1:16:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your great win, Eve:) well done:)
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Date: 9/30/2016 12:45:00 AM
Lovely tribute to our little busy bodies! Congrats Eve X]
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:53:00 PM
BIG congrats, Eve. You really did a good job describing this industrious insect.
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:40:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Date: 9/29/2016 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations.... Now it is time to do a waggle dance!!!
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Date: 9/29/2016 3:32:00 PM
Congrats well deserved x great poem x
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Date: 9/29/2016 4:31:00 PM
thank you ,Wendy, congratulations again .. Hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 1:52:00 PM
congrats on 6th place Eve good poem hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2016 4:32:00 PM
thank you , Shadow, very honored Hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 1:22:00 PM
I knew this would be on the winners list sweet Eve! back with my congrats :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2016 4:31:00 PM
thank you , Laura, congratulations again .. Hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 12:19:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your placement in the 'bees' contest. Well-written and so full of information! Hugs, Sandra
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2016 4:30:00 PM
thank you, Sandra, congratulations again .. Hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 12:09:00 PM
Dear Eve, hearty congrats on your big win ! loved the "golden yellow sea"// love, Anu:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2016 4:30:00 PM
thank you , Anulaxmi, congratulations again .. Hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on your informative poem, Eve! Loved "little buzzing specter"
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2016 4:29:00 PM
thank you, Kim.. Hugs
Date: 9/28/2016 7:30:00 AM
Wow sweet Eve! This is for sure a winner :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/28/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Laura, I hope Shadow likes it :-)
Date: 9/28/2016 4:21:00 AM
I think this is exactly what Shadow is looking for:) Very well executed write, Eve:) hope to see this on the winner's list:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/28/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, :-) , Hugs Eve

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