Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Bees

You need more bees
carried on the breeze.
Waves of chemicals
dropped from the sky
has decimated our lives.
No more flowers,
so no more pollen.
It's your own antenna
that has fallen.
Nectar needed on our
legs connot spread.
Stupid human beings,
so blind to seeing
what Earth is needing.
You shall reap what you sow.
Only then will you know.
You need more bees.

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Barry Stebbings September 27, 2016 at 1:30 PM Very true, Jean. We need to take more care of the bees. Good luck in the contest. Barry. Jean Murray September 27, 2016 at 1:50 PM Thank you Barry.

Seosamh De Burca September 26, 2016 at 4:20 PM Great write and such a good message that needs to be listened to. I concur with the fellow poets comments below. Intelligent indeed. Jean Murray September 26, 2016 at 4:23 PM So good to see you again Seosamh. Thank you for your lovely comment.

Daniel Turner September 26, 2016 at 10:46 AM So very true, Jean. This is a very intelligent poem. I love it! Jean Murray September 26, 2016 at 11:49 AM In a weird kind of way...see what I mean?? Jean Murray September 26, 2016 at 11:48 AM I am very intelligent and a weird kind of way Daniel. Thank you for loving my poem.

Jan Allison September 26, 2016 at 7:41 AM Powerfully penned Jean! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray September 26, 2016 at 11:47 AM Thank you Jan.You too.