Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Bees

Beautiful stripy bees are busily buzzing,
they drift down in waves from the sky.
Gently they sip nectar and spread pollen from the flowers,
then off to their hives they will fly

Their antenna guide them home,
as they drift on a warm zephyr breeze.
It’s a good job they don’t suffer from hay fever
or the poor bees would constantly sneeze!

Contest Bees
Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton

words required, antenna, waves, sky, breeze, nectar, and pollen

09~18~16

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Carol Eastman September 24, 2016 at 12:18 PM A fun read. I loved the end.

White Wolf September 23, 2016 at 3:13 AM Feel like a honey mead now!!! Nice one.

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2016 at 2:47 PM Utterly cute, jan. Sorry I am so behind on your poetry. I just can't keep up these days but on the weekend, i will see more! Good luck in the contest.

Constance La France September 19, 2016 at 7:45 PM Jan, this is just delightful, those lovely bees ~ Jan Allison September 20, 2016 at 2:16 AM Thanks Constance I hope Shadow likes it - I write for fun and had to add a bit of humour at the end:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Eldridge September 19, 2016 at 6:19 PM A honey of a job! Thanks! Jan Allison September 19, 2016 at 6:25 PM :-) thanks Jack:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray September 19, 2016 at 8:28 AM Perfect. Jan Allison September 19, 2016 at 5:09 PM Thanks Jean I had fun writing this one:-) hugs jan xx

Miraj Raha September 19, 2016 at 3:01 AM Love the simplicity of this poem Jan, yet the image of the bee is buzzing in my mind. Jan Allison September 19, 2016 at 5:09 PM Thanks Miraj:-) hugs Jan xx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs September 18, 2016 at 8:53 PM I like that, Good poem Jan Allison September 19, 2016 at 5:10 PM Thanks Gwen:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser September 18, 2016 at 6:45 PM Very descriptive poem with a twist of fun in there, Jan! Good luck in the contest :) Jan Allison September 19, 2016 at 5:10 PM Thanks Laura:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer September 18, 2016 at 6:30 PM ha! very cute and clever, jan! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison September 19, 2016 at 5:11 PM Thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May September 18, 2016 at 5:18 PM Nicely penned Jan...love the humor at the end ....GL in the contest.... Jan Allison September 18, 2016 at 5:20 PM I just couldn't resist Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe September 18, 2016 at 5:17 PM Like many other of your poems, this one made me smile, Jan. Good luck for the contest. Agnes Jan Allison September 18, 2016 at 5:19 PM Thanks Agnes:-):-) I do try and raise a smile if I can:-) hugs Jan xx