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Bees

One day in garden
I was digging into dirt
Hit unknown bees nest
I was swarmed, attacked and stung
Running as I ripped off shirt!

Heidi Sands

9/2/21

Placed 3rd in A Buggy Tanka Contest.

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2021

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September 11, 2021 at 9:19 PM

Good one, Heidi, congratulations on your win. :)

September 12, 2021 at 12:54 PM

Thank you very much Eve :)

James Marshall Goff

September 3, 2021 at 6:49 PM

Sounds to me like hornets...they burrow near the ground...their sting is very painful...good poem!

September 3, 2021 at 8:12 PM

Yes, the stings were very painful. Thank you :)

September 3, 2021 at 3:04 AM

Nice entry for the contest Heidi, best wishes

September 3, 2021 at 7:34 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

September 2, 2021 at 3:54 PM

We do what is necessary! Good one!

September 2, 2021 at 4:01 PM

Yes, thanks. They were inside my shirt stinging me. Take care :)

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