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Beer Bettered Blues

Knuckles banged, finger cut;
Bolt still bonded with the nut.

Mind shaking, temper rising;
Thoughts leading to a cruel surprising.

Bankruptcy looming, crumbling affairs;
Dreams dropping not by one but in pairs.

Heart broke, soul shattered;
Lost the only relationship that mattered.

Sit? Relax? Sip a cold beer?
Think before acting, the answer is near.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mckenzie Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 12:48 PM
enjoyed reading this Micheal well done
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Brewing emotion well expressed, Michael.
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July 25, 2017 at 2:14 AM
Your last couplet indeed. Think before acting, I agree with you .... Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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