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Been Five Years Today

Been five years today
Miss the joy you brought to me
I'll never forget
Those were loving, tender times
Years ago but yesterday

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/6/2015 10:41:00 AM

years ago but yesterday, wounds still bleed, this piece is strong. I have enjoyed your writes and look forward to more!

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/23/2014 11:28:00 AM

Great little rhyme, but paints a big picture! Well done!

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 9:35:00 PM

Stopping by to see if you had another new poem...SKAt

Aging Rock Star
Date: 3/14/2014 4:48:00 AM

Sorry Skat, I'm not very prodigious writer. It will be a while. ARS

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2014 3:51:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Aging :) - I choose your first sweet/moving poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1 Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2014 11:47:00 PM

Again, a lovely poem... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 3/12/2014 10:05:00 PM

Awesome! !!

Aging Rock Star

Date: 3/12/2014 9:11:00 PM

Thank you everyone for being so supportive. I really appreciate it.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2014 7:03:00 PM

Aww such a sad verse - very well written rock star. Jan x

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2014 5:08:00 PM

it always seems like yesterday, Aging Rock Star, great tanka, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

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