Bee Scolds Sluggard

You tell folks you’re as busy as a bee,
but I’ve been watching you. Here’s what I see:
you, sitting on the porch with book in hand
and dozing off. Is this the “work” you planned?

When I fly by your windows, I peek in.
Neglecting dirty dishes is a sin!
I’m shocked to see that messy, unmade bed!
You’re busy—like me? This is what you’ve said.

When you compare us two, I feel distressed.
Thus, in the name of fairness, I suggest
“I’m busy as a sloth” is apropos
for those like you. Let this be your motto!


June 13, 2022
entered in the Bee Creative Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Matt Caliri
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 1:08 PM
Your cute write gave me a laugh. "Thanks" Have a great/blessed day..................
Canerdy Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 6:49 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Leffanta Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Well thought and done! Enjoyed! Busy as a sloth, indeed! Aloha!
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 4:46 PM
Thanks so much, Rico! Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Very clever poem, Janice. I enjoyed the humor. This poem is must win.
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 4:45 PM
Vijay, thanks a million! Janice
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