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Bee Scolds Sluggard

You tell folks you’re as busy as a bee, but I’ve been watching you. Here’s what I see: you, sitting on the porch with book in hand and dozing off. Is this the “work” you planned? When I fly by your windows, I peek in. Neglecting dirty dishes is a sin! I’m shocked to see that messy, unmade bed! You’re busy—like me? This is what you’ve said. When you compare us two, I feel distressed. Thus, in the name of fairness, I suggest “I’m busy as a sloth” is apropos for those like you. Let this be your motto! June 13, 2022 entered in the Bee Creative Poetry Contest Sponsor: Matt Caliri

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Date: 6/15/2022 1:08:00 PM
Your cute write gave me a laugh. "Thanks" Have a great/blessed day..................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/15/2022 6:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Date: 6/14/2022 12:13:00 PM
Well thought and done! Enjoyed! Busy as a sloth, indeed! Aloha!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/14/2022 4:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico! Janice
Date: 6/14/2022 6:13:00 AM
Very clever poem, Janice. I enjoyed the humor. This poem is must win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/14/2022 4:45:00 PM
Vijay, thanks a million! Janice

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