Bedtime Footle

It's late


REM state!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 4, 2009 at 5:38 PM
Oh yes! If I have a restless night, REM is but a dream. Enjoyed this one. I am a book-a-holic too. I can't imagine the world without them. Love to curl up with a good novel. Thank you for the kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen
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February 14, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Donna, how ironic you were reading my work just as I was reading yours! I love your sense of humor. If only I could write a footle! Best wishes, Carolyn
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February 10, 2009 at 8:10 PM
It is rather late in N. Y. Soon I will be in REM sleep as you say. Keep your dreams flowing. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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February 9, 2009 at 6:18 AM
LOve this! This style seems a simple one but I know it can trick us, you maged this one well. Michael
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February 9, 2009 at 6:14 AM
fast... and then we are all awake.. great pace
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February 9, 2009 at 3:21 AM
oh no not so! I have not been able to sleep deep lately! lol love, me
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February 9, 2009 at 1:34 AM
Encore ..... Don't snore .... !! Super footle , Donna , well done !!
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