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Bedtime Assurance

Angels surround me as I sleep A gift from God I can always keep Four are turning around my bed Another hovers above my head Standing guard inside my room They save my soul from certain doom Keeping me secure at night, Constantly ready for a fight Watching for what I can’t see, Angels are always protecting me Jonathan D. kirk

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 8:03:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Jonathan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/13/2012 9:09:00 AM

Nicely rhymed. I think it should be "angels" not "angles" Also, God should be capitalized. Love, Kim

Jonathan Kirk
Date: 1/13/2012 4:31:00 PM

No, there are two 30 degree and the other four are 90 degree or what I call just right angles....everyone needs a good angle....just joking. I really appreciate the proof, keeps me from looking like a maroon. Thanks, JK