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summer sun rising through bedroom window first good morning kiss posted on April 29, 2018

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Date: 4/29/2018 10:23:00 PM
I'm with Caren on that one. Let the sunshine in! Sweet ink. xomo!
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:29:00 PM
This is why I do not like my black out drapes; I have nailed them onto the ceiling since my husband insists we keep them. I love watching the sun wake me up,much more gentle that those buzzer things.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/1/2018 2:31:00 AM
Funny. We have bric a brac plates on the dining room ceiling. Lots of sunshine, Kai
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:05:00 PM
Absolutely. I totally agree, Caren. And on rainy mornings you get to sleep in.
Date: 4/29/2018 4:19:00 PM
very lovely Line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, for your much appreciated visit.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:13:00 PM
love this one. Very haiku-ish for me!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/29/2018 12:37:00 PM
alludes to a spouse...a cat, or perhaps just the sun. Enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2018 11:11:00 AM
I love when my readers fill in the blanks. I hope you do too! Love being kissed by the morning sun ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 1:32:00 PM
Yes, the reader fills in the blanks. I was trying to describe the gradual invasion of the sun through the bedroom window though.