Bedroom Window

summer sun rising through bedroom window first good morning kiss posted on April 29, 2018

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/29/2018 10:23:00 PM

I'm with Caren on that one. Let the sunshine in! Sweet ink. xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2018 7:29:00 PM

This is why I do not like my black out drapes; I have nailed them onto the ceiling since my husband insists we keep them. I love watching the sun wake me up,much more gentle that those buzzer things.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/1/2018 2:31:00 AM

Funny. We have bric a brac plates on the dining room ceiling. Lots of sunshine, Kai

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:05:00 PM

Absolutely. I totally agree, Caren. And on rainy mornings you get to sleep in.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2018 4:19:00 PM

very lovely Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:06:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, for your much appreciated visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 2:13:00 PM

love this one. Very haiku-ish for me!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:06:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2018 12:37:00 PM

alludes to a spouse...a cat, or perhaps just the sun. Enjoyed!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2018 11:11:00 AM

I love when my readers fill in the blanks. I hope you do too! Love being kissed by the morning sun ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 1:32:00 PM

Yes, the reader fills in the blanks. I was trying to describe the gradual invasion of the sun through the bedroom window though.