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Bedroom Eyes

BEDROOM EYES In the bedroom behind your eyes Clothes are strewn about, Open drawers display unwashed articles and misplaced matches, Crumpled photos of discarded men Lay scattered like fallen soldiers on love’s battlefield. Is this my destiny? The graveyard of forgotten lovers. The room is dark and sultry, I stumble around the mess to find you sitting, On the unmade bed, in centerfold poses, Inviting, seducing siren. My mind gyro-spins, images of past suitors Flash before me like neon exit signs And I am left with tombstone reflections. I turn to leave, afraid of the reasons Unaware of the rhyme, still the door eludes me And I hit the wall in the room behind your eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/10/2019 8:37:00 AM
I particularly Enjoyed the last few lines, well done on your fab poem :-) x
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Date: 12/22/2016 8:40:00 AM
I second Paloma's comment. The last three lines are money! Great inspired-by-reality poem, Phil. Very edgy, very honest. Beautiful art showing the ugly squalor of fake imitation of love. Touche. Love and peace to you, bro.
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Date: 12/11/2016 8:53:00 AM
Very cool Phil, the imagery is haphazard, which adds to the ambiance, last two lines are money!
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Date: 10/15/2016 12:15:00 PM
Wow - really liked this.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/15/2016 2:58:00 PM
Thank you; this was written in 1977, I was 24 and it seems like a lifetime ago.

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