Bedeviled

Beguiled in the Garden of Eden.
Eve brought mortality to herself and then, to man.
Deceived by Satan’s clever enticements.
Earth became a testing ground; separation from God began.
Vanquished by sin, then expelled from the beautiful Garden. 
Idyllic life replaced by: toil, thistles and struggles; enduring faith tested.
Living with hope for salvation, bedeviled by sin, sacrifice began.

© October 14, 2010
 Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Dane... congrats on win in contest.....Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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October 25, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Paula's contest. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Good luck in the contest Danie! Light & Love
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October 20, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on this ultimate of bedevilment poem, and your win. Love, J
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October 20, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your win in Paula's contest with this wonderful write and super entry ... enjoy your big win today ... for a brilliant write luv ...
Locksley Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:05 PM
Truly the devil in the Garden of Eden. Great work, Dane Ann. Congratulations on your win!
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October 19, 2010 at 7:27 PM
VERY nicely penned, Dane Ann. Congratulations. Hey, I never hear from you anymore. I hope you are ok. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 3:02 AM
Dane the light is still shining in this Acrostic, Way to go! Agape, Moses
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