Becoming the River

Becoming The River

If I were a river 
nothing could hold me back
not mountains or valleys 
not concrete or steel. 
If I were a river 
others would feel my power 
hour after hour
as I hurried off the beaten track 
with my liquid pulse 
pounding the shore
my voice, a steady roar. 
On and on without pity 
through the country side. 
around the city
down the mountain 
in a daring leap
on and on I’d swiftly keep moving. 
Churning, turning from dusk till dawn 
in sunlight or moonlight 
on and on till the end of time. 
Nothing would stop me 
for I'm the river 
and I will go on 
and on 
and on…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 1/26/2019 3:42:00 PM
This is so descriptive of the force of the flowing river, very inspiring!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/26/2019 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. Hugs, Susan
Date: 1/23/2019 10:48:00 PM
wow beautiful feelings and poetic expression
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/24/2019 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Mahtab. I appreciate that. Blessings, Susan
Date: 1/22/2019 2:00:00 PM
I think, Susan, you would make a beautiful, powerful river. And I would not think anyone could hold you back. Well done!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/22/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Caren! I love rivers, oceans, lakes and creeks. And of course, I love waterfalls. The sounds are heavenly. Blessings. :) Susan
Date: 1/22/2019 11:55:00 AM
Very nice! I enjoyed this poem. Well done :)
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/22/2019 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I am glad you enjoyed it. :)
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