David Mohn Poet Sapphic stanza

Becoming Spring

Winter’s newborn fusses in blustered billows;
Colicked thunder rumbles from tantrumed lightning.      
    Blossoms nursing heavenward – April showers.
                  Christened is springtime

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Alexia Rowell October 1, 2015 at 10:10 AM I hope the sapphic verse is easy for all of us Nice writing by the way.

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2015 at 4:44 PM oh, I just saw he had only top three mostly.Well Awesome then!! we fortunate in how he did the winners. I was thinking to myself that there were so many good ones. No wonder he gave mostly top wins.

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2015 at 4:43 PM well, it's on the list, but I think it was one of the BEST. Congrats, my friend.

Skat A May 6, 2015 at 9:49 AM Hi David. Congrats on the win. SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A May 6, 2015 at 9:05 AM David:) Congratulations on your awesome win. Love Linda

Sara Kendrick April 26, 2015 at 3:52 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry.. These are not so easy to write but is seems that you have excelled..Of course, I don't know about meter but the theme and story are excellent..Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2015 at 2:20 PM VERY unique and creative entry in the contest. I better see this on the winners' list!

Robert Lindley April 19, 2015 at 10:14 PM O' so nice.... Spring comes out as winter's baby, and thats quite the description.. A7, great write...

Barbara Gorelick April 19, 2015 at 9:14 PM I like...nice way you have used the baby theme. BG

Thvia Shetley April 19, 2015 at 8:33 PM lovely tribute x