Becoming One Together

My darling ELOQUENTLY WHISPERED in DULCET tones “I Love You”
 
as she lay TRANQUIL once more in the SPLENDOR of BLISS,

while a pair of Mourning Doves offered LILTING songs of peace and love

to be carried on the breeze, like the WAFTING of FRAGRANT LAVENDER

that often bathes us in the serenity of our afterglow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Beautiful and So Romantic..Charma
Murphy Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 12:16 PM
very nice write good luck in the contest faleshia
Gorelick Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Good work John..I love it..BG
Mehta Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 7:14 AM
Good luck in the contest
Trusty Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 7:00 AM
Doris and Francine, thank you for your comments. This was inspired by the contest but too late for entry. "He who hesitates is lost!"
Roberts Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 6:51 AM
very nice, good luck in the contest
Culverhouse Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 6:51 AM
very sensual and romantic, those words are beautiful in themselves and you have made sense of them.
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