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Becoming One Together

My darling ELOQUENTLY WHISPERED in DULCET tones “I Love You” as she lay TRANQUIL once more in the SPLENDOR of BLISS, while a pair of Mourning Doves offered LILTING songs of peace and love to be carried on the breeze, like the WAFTING of FRAGRANT LAVENDER that often bathes us in the serenity of our afterglow.

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Date: 4/14/2010 3:55:00 PM
Beautiful and So Romantic..Charma
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Date: 4/14/2010 12:16:00 PM
very nice write good luck in the contest faleshia
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Date: 4/14/2010 10:16:00 AM
Good work John..I love it..BG
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Date: 4/14/2010 7:14:00 AM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/14/2010 7:00:00 AM
Doris and Francine, thank you for your comments. This was inspired by the contest but too late for entry. "He who hesitates is lost!"
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:51:00 AM
very sensual and romantic, those words are beautiful in themselves and you have made sense of them.
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:51:00 AM
very nice, good luck in the contest
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