Becoming Mother Nature

What if Mother Nature retired, and I applied for her position?
How would I dare to assume  her secret duties, her un-ending cycles
Could I invoke such power, or must I simply become her?

Spin myself into a cocoon of natural faith.
Let the atoms of the cosmos transform my light into spirit.
 
Would I then emerge, complete with every force of mystery?
Awaken each day with a pink mist, and burn each evening sky with crimson?
Command each leaf, each breath and every symphony of living?

Would I wear her gowns of argent, lavender and aqua?
Step lightly on mossy stones, and dance upon silvery meadows?
Grace the heavens in cloud-white glinting wings
and in the depths of darkest night bear stars, filled
with the promise of every new beginning?

In Honor of my Fave Poems Andrea Dietrich. 
First Place.

101 in a ROW contest -2
Contest Judged:  7/27/2016 9:30:00 PM
Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A 
5th. Place
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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 10:14 PM
Love the whole concept ~ Well penned, SuZ
Bangalee Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:22 AM
stupendous writing; superb poem penned
Delaney Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 4:07 AM
Thankyou Mahtab: I appreciate your kind comment. SuZ
De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Congrats on your win with your fantastic poem, such vivid imagery and wonderful lines.
Delaney Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 4:10 AM
Hi Seosamh: You are so nice to send congratulations. Most appreciated. SuZ
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Fantastic imagery, Suzanne! A lovely write! Congrats!
Delaney Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 4:10 AM
Thanks so much, Kim:
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:09 AM
Congrats Suzanne, for your placement with this deep, spiritual, enchanting piece!! ;-)
A   Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Hello Lovely Suzanne, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
Richards Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:32 PM
I love the imaginative way you have become one with nature !! Lovely poem, Suzanne !!
A  Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:26 PM
, CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Suzanne, Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 8:01 PM
I love the unique twist you gave this contest. This is a delight!!
Morrison Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Marvelous work! Kim
Puddifoot Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 2:17 PM
congrats on your winning fave poem, some beautiful imagery in this, particularly in the second stanza :)
Jones Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations :-)
Gasun Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 10:10 PM
Many congrats my dear poet friend! This is indeed great and amazing ! Soo love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
A   Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Hi Suzanne, , Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
A  Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Suzanne, a sweet win~*~SKAT
Esquire Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Dear Suzanne,The vivid imagery of this marvelous MasterPiece,coupled with YOUR "Nature POEMS"YOU would be a shoo in for the Position of "Mother Nature"I vote for YOU.Close the ballot.YOU Win unanimously!! Superb Pen. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Spirit Patient...Harry
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Suzanne, was this shown at PFT? It seems vaguely familiar to me. I was just reading several of your poems. I think this is one of my favorites of yours!! I always love best when you employ great imagery in free verse. FAVE.
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:03 PM
Suzanne that would be one heck of a challenge...David
Delaney Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:30 PM
was it something some-one said? "Dream big dreams."
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