Evelyn Judy Buehler | + Follow Poet |
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Becoming

The purplish crimson sun's now arising,
And buds are waiting on yellow rosebush.
Yesterday lessons for today are guiding,
As birds take violet skies of dawn hush.
The youth grew so quickly, time's ambush!

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Joe Dimino Date: 7/25/2021 4:16:00 PM Beautiful, thoughtful words -- and the image is stunning; a talented photographer as well. So much warmth to share. Great work, Evelyn. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/25/2021 8:55:00 PM Thank you very much for your heartwarming appreciation. However, I can't take credit for the picture. It goes to Aruggieri from Pixabay. Best of wishes, Evelyn :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/24/2021 10:48:00 PM Colorful lesson on life. The subdued colors are well used. Hugs. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/25/2021 10:15:00 AM Thank you, Victor. :) Hugs.

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/24/2021 8:43:00 PM 'Time's ambush,' -- wonderful turn of phrase, Evelyn. Peace, Gershon Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/25/2021 10:20:00 AM Thank you, Gershon. Enjoy your week. :)

Quoth Theraven Date: 7/24/2021 8:42:00 PM Evelyn, You put a spell on a rose and taught us all what's Becoming. -Richard Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/25/2021 10:22:00 AM Thank you for the smiles, Richard. :)

L Milton Hankins Date: 7/24/2021 7:35:00 PM Lovely quintain, Evelyn. I liked how you wove color into the lines. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/24/2021 7:50:00 PM Thank you, Milton. This is my first quintain. I'm so glad you liked it. :)