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Becoming

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The purplish crimson sun's now arising, And buds are waiting on yellow rosebush. Yesterday lessons for today are guiding, As birds take violet skies of dawn hush. The youth grew so quickly, time's ambush!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/25/2021 4:16:00 PM
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Beautiful, thoughtful words -- and the image is stunning; a talented photographer as well. So much warmth to share. Great work, Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/25/2021 8:55:00 PM
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Thank you very much for your heartwarming appreciation. However, I can't take credit for the picture. It goes to Aruggieri from Pixabay. Best of wishes, Evelyn :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/24/2021 10:48:00 PM
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Colorful lesson on life. The subdued colors are well used. Hugs.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/25/2021 10:15:00 AM
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Thank you, Victor. :) Hugs.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2021 8:43:00 PM
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'Time's ambush,' -- wonderful turn of phrase, Evelyn. Peace, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/25/2021 10:20:00 AM
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Thank you, Gershon. Enjoy your week. :)
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/24/2021 8:42:00 PM
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Evelyn, You put a spell on a rose and taught us all what's Becoming. -Richard
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/25/2021 10:22:00 AM
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Thank you for the smiles, Richard. :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/24/2021 7:35:00 PM
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Lovely quintain, Evelyn. I liked how you wove color into the lines.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/24/2021 7:50:00 PM
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Thank you, Milton. This is my first quintain. I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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