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Become the Swan

Example for my contest which is what I call a "Charlie-Quadku" (lol) outside the shell the ugly duck without true heart... gets uglier the ugliest of the ugly with a true heart... becomes the swan

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 7:57:00 PM

A gem, Charles. A FAVE for me.

Dm Babbit

Date: 9/5/2019 1:43:00 PM

Nice

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/2/2019 2:04:00 AM

Thanks for the example; likewise for the message of your poem. Thanks for sponsoring contests to help enhance poetic prowess... God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 5:04:00 PM

Love how you turned it around and made the swan story as we know it at the end. Nice example for your contest, charles.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 5:04:00 PM

I was just going to do four lines when I tried this. You don't mind people doing multiple verses?

John Gondolf

Date: 9/1/2019 6:19:00 AM

Not withstanding being an example for your contest, this is wonderful poetry, Charlie, nicely penned my friend. John

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/1/2019 4:58:00 AM

Nice lead--but alas, I chickened out, Aloha always William

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2019 12:34:00 PM

thanks for a great example Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2019 8:31:00 AM

Charlie, this is amazing and a great example for your contest and true 'cause those babies are ugly at birth but then one day transform to the SWAN, I am going to start working on mine right after my two dance classes today - I like your Charlie-Quadku, Charlie !

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2019 8:04:00 AM

nicely done....neat form, i will try this one for sure :) hugs