Become More Diligent

Become More Diligent

Good poems will read and better mine will get
When great poets like you on Poetry Soup let
Become my great guide as I am growing
Ending up with amount of my poems over-flowing.

Not only that, a perfect example you set
For me to follow and even far better yet
With each of God's poems, I am impressed;
Love each one and constantly have caressed.

Which poem at Poetry Society should I read?
To fulfill a woeful want while meeting a need
And take heed when you are just like some
Whose ego and heads to high have become.

So my poems are thoughtful and never naughty
And hoping I haven't become too haughty;
Time quickly arrived swiftly passing by and went;
God, guide me in writing my poems more diligent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Very thoughtful write. So many gems of truth here. Nice and powerful ending.
Horn Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Thanks. How did you fid my poem? Jim Horn
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