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Because You Are Mine

Because you are mine The sun rises slowly a soft April glow In peach cobbler ribbons this morning to show A new day is coming so warm on the wind Sweet rose petal whispers to tell once again Each dawn brings a vision of beauty to see and meadowlarks singing in love’s melody With dew drops a glisten in cut crystal shine Each morning is perfect because you are mine Good morning Soupers

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/20/2017 4:41:00 PM

Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully painted romantic, dreamy,sweet, passionate, good morning love poem Chris:)All so beautiful!Very enchanting. Just awesome!I truly enjoyed it ! A fav too. For sure I'll continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry and (hearing) music, my friend Chris:))I really hope, pray that all is fine with you, Chris.Best wishes to you in everything and take good care of yourself! Spill ink!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend ahead ! In his light God bless you always!:)) D

Chris Green
Date: 7/21/2017 5:30:00 PM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Trisha Romano

Date: 4/21/2017 1:39:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery. Sweet rose petal whispers.... wow! Amazing.

Chris Green
Date: 4/21/2017 1:53:00 PM

I am happy you liked this one. Thank you so much for your kind words.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/18/2017 5:36:00 PM

Top of The Evening Chris. Since you say morning (ha ha) how about having a champagne with orange juice toast. Skip the cobbler bring on the champagne (ha ha) I'm sorry Chris. I'm just kidding. Your entry is marvelous and always a wonderful way to begin the morning with love and appreciation for live and everything with it. Honestly. Have a wonderful night. Well done entirely. Now pass the champagne orange juice (ha ha)

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 5:45:00 PM

That sounds good to me and FYI...here champagne and orange juice is called a mimosa and I do like mimosas. :) Almost as much as I like the uplifting and beautiful comments you always leave for me to find, morning or night. I hope you have a wonderful evening as well...it is very close to evening here. Thank you my friend, cheers to you Lisa.

John Hamilton

Date: 4/18/2017 12:21:00 PM

Beautiful rhyme as always, I was wondering about the title and there it was in the last line summing everything up nicely, good morning to you too!

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 12:54:00 PM

Thanks so very much John, Good morning. I appreciate your nice thoughts and yes, I will usually fit the title in somewhere. :)

Lenna Walker

Date: 4/18/2017 11:04:00 AM

Nature and romance beautifully portrayed !!!!

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:07:00 AM

Thanks so very much Lenna.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/18/2017 10:05:00 AM

Good morning Chris, This is simply beautiful and romantic. I tire of your morning greetings. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:07:00 AM

Thank you so very much Alexis for your nice comments on my poem.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/18/2017 9:57:00 AM

Indeed its a perfect morning and afternoon when I get to read such words....Gonna google what peach cobbler is :)..Am curious now.Good Morning Chris.I love youR poetRy

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/18/2017 11:15:00 AM

Hey Alexis...Darren..and Chris...I found it ..It definitely looks delicious..and might be worth a try.I did find another definition..A hit with a pan on the girl's head from behind..lol:)..Im sure you were not referring to that one Chris...Especially when one reads your so beautiful poem..and I llllooove the title too :).Darren coming to read you sn..Alexis..just read you ..Hugs.

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:06:00 AM

Hey it looks like a party here, ok if I join in? :) Peach cobbler is delicious. Thank you Charmaine, Darren and Alexis for being my friends and offering such kind thoughts.

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 10:31:00 AM

hahaha, i didn't know either until recently, this poem is turning into a culinary lesson :D

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/18/2017 10:05:00 AM

Peach cobbler is sooo darn good:-) Alexis

Ibrahim Bashiru

Date: 4/18/2017 9:34:00 AM

Sweet lovely poem. thanks

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:06:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kindness

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/18/2017 8:14:00 AM

Chris, descriptive diamonds flow and carry me away on a cut crystal river of admiration! Elegant plus! 7 My best to you, chuck

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 9:17:00 AM

Thank so very much Chuck for your kindness this morning. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/18/2017 7:31:00 AM

It is so nice to start the day on such a savory colorful treat brought on the wings of a sweet song bird:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words Anne Marie. I appreciate your visit this morning

Tim Smith

Date: 4/18/2017 7:19:00 AM

What a lovely morning Chris...I'll take a slice too

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 9:16:00 AM

No problem my friend, there is plenty to go around. :)

Darren White

Date: 4/18/2017 6:15:00 AM

Peach cobbler ribbons, so lovely, but for some reason it also makes me VERY hungly, I'd love some peach cobbler. Before Jason became my boyfriend, I had never heard of peach cobblers, but he sent me pictures of the ones he made himself, and ever since :) Good morning Chris, may she forever be yours!

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 9:16:00 AM

Thanks my friend, peach cobbler is quite delicious. I am happy you enjoyed this one