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Because of You

"because of you" I see you with every step I take the sky of blue the grass of green its you with each shade of glory I see you as I look to the far and wide oceans flow because of you I hear you with each singing bird the bells that ring the keys that play its you with each note and tune I hear you when voices sound music plays because of you I feel you with light of the sun and moon the warmth that ignites the light that shines its you with each illuminating star I feel you as these graces talk to me these graces are because of you you touch me more and more love is an endless blooming garden these senses are because of you living within my soul never to fall my life my light my all SkyWatcher - 02-23-17

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Date: 3/1/2017 7:15:00 AM
Aw Lisa, you're all nice and enthusiastic, and you have a cute bird avatar. : )
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/1/2017 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Doug. Your review is so appreciated along with your generosity. I adore birds.
Date: 2/28/2017 9:13:00 AM
This is so beautiful, it speaks of every possible love, in every possible way. On your beautiful words, I feel close to my loved one, and smile.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/28/2017 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Darren for saying what you did. I'm so glad. Allow this entry to mean anything you wish. Love here on earth or the heavens whichever works best. Your review is most generous and I very much enjoyed your intake.
Date: 2/25/2017 5:54:00 PM
Very beautiful love poem Lisa! Very romantic and sweet painted love piece, which I truly enjoyed reading it, Lisa:) A 7! And a fav! Continue writing and sharing.:)Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:)D.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/25/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Dorian for such a wonderful review and grade of 7. I'm honored. Allow me to say the same to you about continue writing. Blessings back to you.
Date: 2/24/2017 9:31:00 AM
Hi Lisa, I enjoyed this piece. You shared your heart in this write. I found it to be spiritual as well. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/24/2017 10:50:00 AM
Yes Alexis this could be spiritual as well. Thank you for being so observant to that side of the entry. I am honored by your grade and for sharing your intake with me.
Date: 2/24/2017 7:23:00 AM
This is beautiful Lisa! Very nice :)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/24/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Heidi very much
Date: 2/24/2017 6:03:00 AM
Sure sounds like love to me. it is amazing the feeling when someone is everything to you. You see them, feel them, hear them in every thing that there is. Your wonderful poem Lisa expresses this feeling perfectly.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/24/2017 6:10:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. If I haven't said thank you properly for all your generosity - Thank you very much. I enjoyed your intake and feedback not only to this entry here but for all the other entries as well.

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