Notes About The Poem

"'Goddamn,' Augustus said quietly. 'Aren't you something els.' (13)". Augustus brought love into hazels life. She did have love before he came but he brought a different type of love with him. A deep strong love unlike anything Hazel had ever felt. He made Hazel a stronger person.

- Because Love Makes Everything Beautiful -

When you kiss my lips
It feels like soft butterfly wings
My love for you runs so deeply
to a place that does not tell reality anymore

This deepest secret nobody knows
More than I thought, you put my life upside down
A passion, how special, can not get enough
The feeling that inspires impresses and consumes me

You colored my life with beautiful shades
A wonderful change, a miraculous transformation
Of love that makes us one
Reason and feelings go hand in hand

True love focus on values and actions
Your beauty is like a diamond, fascinating my thoughts
We are born to this world of love

Twinkling stars and moon light in silver
Protects a loving couple on the beach










12.02.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Romantic poem - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
2nd place in the contest

Poems of the day; 14.02.2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Elisha Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:34 AM
This is indeed romantic and very beautiful. keep it up
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 1:16 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Oluwasola :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
S     Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Such a beautiful, romantic poem Anne-Lise. I've apparently missed this one ... so congratulations to you on your win in the contest as well as your recent POTD!!! ~Judy
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 11:56 AM
- Judt, many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations X 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Duet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 11:03 PM
So loverly, Anne-Lise. There's nothing like love and love poetry. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 3:04 AM
- Many thanks Carole, for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ajmal Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, congrats on your beautiful poem being featured as POTD and also congrats to you on winning the contest, it s indeed a beauty, good luck
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 8:36 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations X 2, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chitre Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 2:29 AM
Beautiful poem Ann-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:10 AM
- Appreciated your comment and visit, many thanks Shefali :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raynes Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Congratulation Anne-Lise with this beautiful read on POTD
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:16 AM
- Many thanks Lewis, for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your beautiful poem honored as Poem Of The Day and also for your fine placement in the 'romantic poem' contest! Hope your Valentine's day was lovely. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:16 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Back to congratulations on Poem Of The Day , Sunshine!.. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:15 AM
- Eve, many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Congrats, Anne-Lise for your lovely poem of the day!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:15 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Congrats Sunshine, this poem is as lovely as bouquet of the finest flowers;-)
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:14 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:38 PM
congratulations for POTD with this tender poem of love expressed
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:14 AM
- Many thanks Frederic, for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful POTD !!!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:13 AM
- Mike, many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Congrata on POTD...A great poem...
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:12 AM
- S.O., many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations Sunshine on POTD. Regards Tom HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.
Cunningham Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:35 AM
Sorry Sunshine, was on my phone and sent the comment that was going somewhere else. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:11 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Beautiful writing! Happy Valentine's Day!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:09 AM
- Appreciated your comment and visit, many thanks Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on a delightful reflection on love and romance! Congratulations also on your high placement in the contest. Blessings - :) Bartholomew
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:30 PM
- Bartholomew, appreciated your comment and congratulations :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Swartz Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:40 AM
A very beautiful beautiful poem Anne-Lise. Congratulations on POTD.
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:30 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 14, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Wonderful Anne-Lise, congratulations on potd! Valentines love dear poetess! xomo
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:32 AM
- Appreciated your comment and congratulations, Maureen :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Congrats on POTD, Anne-Lise, very fitting love poem for today :)
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:31 AM
- Agnes, many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gondolf Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Such a beautiful romantic poem, Anne-Lise, congrats on POTD! John
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:02 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Returning again with congrats on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:54 AM
- You always so kind Vijay, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Francy Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:01 AM
IT'S REALLY AMAZING POEM.
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:06 AM
- Appreciated your comment and visit, many thanks Ponnu :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 5:43 AM
What happy, contented and loving feelings run throughout this poem. No artifice but true emotions. The glorious stand-out quote, 'You colored my life with beautiful shades.'
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 5:49 AM
- I am writing from my heart, nice you liked it Emma :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:44 AM
A beautiful and romantic love poem Anne-Lise full of loving truth and appreciation 'You colored my life with beautiful shades' - shining poetry. Congratulations on your POTD honors and belated congrats for your recent contest win. Warmest wishes always. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 5:47 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations X 2, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:47 AM
WoW! Ann-Lise, Not only does this write depict a beautiful and romantic love story, it has a good message within it. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 1:35 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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