Beaver Island

Hi Paul, as always simple lines and simple words that tells a story.. happy ending is always a welcome!, Olive :)

I like the rhyme, and I also like the surprised ending.

this flows so gloriously, the rhymes just fall so naturally without being forced!much enjoyed Paul, especially the last line!

Such a warm loving poem, what better is there, than to buy the land you wish to build your dream house on. and how beautfully you created this cozy atmosphere, telling us this this purchase was no pie in the sky, for, Hush ~ I can hear a baby's cry! So so sweet. Congratulation on a much deserved P.O.T.D my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

a charming write well deserving of POTD, paul...I have a strong visual of this poem!

Got lost in this dear Paul, says so much more than words!

Paul, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win in my contest. Delightful trimeric~~POTD too!! Janice

Congrats on POTD, Paul! Interesting! You have us leaning in.

' With rugged charm, simple décor. ' Sounds so dreamy. I love the tender moments within, the elegance of your words. The ending brings a smile to my heart. :) You've created a masterpiece, Paul. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Hello Paul, sorry for the late response due to PS issues. Nonetheless, what a wonderful poem of new builds and yet with a twist in the end. I loved all the excellent imageries which made me feel like I was right there. Congratulations on POTD. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Well done on your fine POTD!

Whoa~~Surprise, surprise. I enjoyed reading your POTD. Way to go~~Congratulations on your winner. Sara K

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day with your win writing away..................

Sounds like a perfect place to be Paul! Such a comforting and warm feel good poem!! Love it!! Big Congratulations on POTD my friend! Debx

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Bravo Paul this is a delightful poem the title made me smile as i think I have a beaver poem in the next book lol, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx

Dear Paul,what a lovely poem! The way you capture the serene beauty of Beaver Isle and the anticipation of building a home there is truly heart-warming. The repeating lines give it a soothing, rhythm, reflecting the natural flow of life by the lake. I especially love the gentle transition from house to home— highlighting that it’s not just a place but a shared dream and space for new beginnings. The ending with the baby’s cry feels like a promise of love and family, adding a beautiful layer of joy and hope. Congratulations on an awesome POTD my friend...Hugs

Paul, congratulations on POTD.

Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD

Beautiful poetry Paul, love the ending. Congratulations on receiving ‘Poem of the Day’ ~ Beryl

Can just picture it Paul, the perfect life, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom

Congratulations on POTD. It is a lovely poem.

Congrats on your potd Paul!

Awwn this is such a soul warming write and the ending wasnt expected at all, so well woven, and flows so well too! I love how descriptive it is especially, “ Their house was built in rustic style This house a home they planned to make.” A house when homed is a place that would resonate with ones heartbeat, so beautiful! Pleasure reading this gem! Your rhymes are brilliant! Best wishes for the contest too, sending you light always

You ever amaze with the words you compose and the poetry that speaks your mind and soul! I so much enjoyed unfolding the twist of the story ! So happy I am, Paul to be here one again and relishing your so wonderful and unique poetry! My best wishes for the honour of outstanding placement! My deepest regards. God bless you.