Beauty Remembered

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Grandma sits outside Sun cast glows on long tendrils I watch from doorway Unpinned tresses flowing loose Past beauty remembered still
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loving Iii Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 4:10 PM
fasinating. that you have to be a certian age to see it happen, yet to look at a flower over the course of a few days. and realize we already live in an eternity, john
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 8:08 PM
A nice creative on beauty remembered, virginia
Conway Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 12:32 PM
What a wonderful memory to have - good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
Sweetheart Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 12:25 PM
So lovely Virginia.. good luck in Rick's contest.. my entry is "Love Conquers All"... fascinating form..luv. it ..with luv..ciao..
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August 25, 2010 at 4:36 AM
Mitchell, a lovely way to reminisce the nature that has passed you through the years. A wonderful Tanka, to enjoy,..p.d.
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