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Beauty Remembered

Grandma sits outside Sun cast glows on long tendrils I watch from doorway Unpinned tresses flowing loose Past beauty remembered still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/24/2010 4:10:00 PM
fasinating. that you have to be a certian age to see it happen, yet to look at a flower over the course of a few days. and realize we already live in an eternity, john
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Date: 8/25/2010 8:08:00 PM
A nice creative on beauty remembered, virginia
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Date: 8/25/2010 12:32:00 PM
What a wonderful memory to have - good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/25/2010 12:25:00 PM
So lovely Virginia.. good luck in Rick's contest.. my entry is "Love Conquers All"... fascinating form..luv. it ..with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:36:00 AM
Mitchell, a lovely way to reminisce the nature that has passed you through the years. A wonderful Tanka, to enjoy,..p.d.
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