Beauty of the Cosmos

Looking out at the beauty of a star filled sky,
Dreaming of the millennia which have flown by.
Trying to comprehend the vast expanse, 
Endless, unthinkable  it holds me in a trance.

The pain experienced on our own little earth,
Increasing over time with each new birth,
Times this by a billion, a trillion maybe,
That is what the universe must undoubtedly see.

Such beauty have the stars, seeing so much in a glance,
Performing their waltz, their everlasting dance,
The planets, the comets, the meteorites too,
So much beauty for one’s eyes to view.

Are we humans really a lonely band,
Or will we yet see an alien hand,
Perhaps a new species will come shooting by,
Who notice the signals, forever leaving our sky.

Amazing, wonderful, enticing and vast, 
Looking at the stars is looking to the past
A real life time machine, a real life mystery,
Look at its depths to see all times history.

Perhaps in the future, maybe we’ll find,
There’s more to this universe than just our kind
But aliens are debateable, our future is too,
One thing for certain is the beauty of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/9/2010 2:35:00 PM
wow! this is amazing and i love it,, the cosmos are such a beauty,, enjoyed your poem,..Linda
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Date: 11/4/2010 1:01:00 PM
You really put your heart into your writing, Lee, and you appear to be a deep thinker. One day mankind will know whether or not life exists out among the trillions of solar systems that form our universe. Some scientists believe carbon-based life forms existed once on Mars. It may be many millennia before we know the truth. Very interesting poetry! Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:51:00 AM
well., yoy might be the king of rhyme. it is real good stuff
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Date: 10/25/2010 5:43:00 AM
Hi Lee the builder.Your poetry IS good,Don't doubt yourself. Builders have hearts and souls just like the rest of us,creative people don't have the monopoly to write.And you do have a natural gift.You should have seen my hubby's first attempt-he was a welder-bless him but it was for me and I treasure it but he doesn't have your flair.As for your other write it came from deep inside you I know you weren't knocking anyone's beliefs.You come across as a nice fellah So happy writing Luv June
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:46:00 PM
Cool poem Lee.Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poem and hope to read more soon
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Date: 10/24/2010 3:41:00 PM
This Lee exposes to me a beautiful soul.I love this ,your use of descriptive phrasing with far sightedness.I believe we're not alone.I just hope they're more advanced than us in other ways apart from technology.Because if they still possess the weaknesses we haven't yet overcome,the prospect of a visit doesn't look inviting. Re -your poetry, I think you have a natural gift for rhythm, write well and are able to capture the imagination of readers.Your last line is really special. luv June
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Date: 10/24/2010 11:30:00 AM
Hey guys, I've never wriiten poetry before and i'll be honest have never really read it either. However today was a rainy day and in my boredom i wrote the above poem, it seemed to come to me really easily (but perhaps thats because it isn't very good! lol). Anyway, i actually enjoyed it and maybe I have found a new avenue to express myself. Consequently i'd love to hear your feedback, as i genuinely don't have a clue if its any good! Thanks in advance, L
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