Beauty of Magical Forest

• * ) Forest of stars all clad in jade Varnishing buds with hints of cream, As magic weaves through sky’s brocade. * Lucent veil lifts trance of nightshade Garlands tossing my hair, agleam Forest of night all clad in jade. * Leaves dancing, O wings on parade Butterflies reel to catch my dream; As magic weaves through sky’s brocade. ~ Tinsels from grass drip to cascade Such loveliness cruising downstream *Forest of stars all clad in jade. * * Then, pixies dart on rock’s glossed shade My breath enthralled by stardust beam; As magic weaves through sky’s brocade.~ * *) Homeward bound, tasting mystic glade Fey whispers like child-like hours' dream. Forest of stars all decked in jade, ~As magic weaves through sky’s brocade. The Magical Forest Contest of Roger Horsch
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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Dear Nette, this poem is my favorite and going into my fav. file. CONGRATULATIONS on all of your first place wins! Wow, you are really on a roll with all your wins. Very impressive seeing your name on so many different wins. Your poetry is uniquely beautiful and inspiring. I wish l had the time to comment on each one of them. You write such creative pieces that are very outstanding. That is saying a lot from a club this large. Please accept my highest praise. Blessings. Lotus
Oyewole Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 6:48 AM
Cute one. Congrats on your fine win.
Chircop Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 4:54 PM
So so beautiful...Your verses-Mesmerizing
Phookan Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Weaving the lines with your very own touch of magic! Congrats nette on a beautiful win... love you!
Arowolo Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Wonderful and splendid piece,Nette...Congrats on your well deserved win...
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 12:54 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FANTASTIC WINNING POEM ,NUMBER 1,NETTE ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Being a forest dweller, I must say this is a magical delightful read well deserving of a first place win! Congratualtions!
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Beautiful expressions on beauty and congrats on the win, nette
Garg Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 3:12 AM
"Butterflies reel to catch my dream"--- fabulous. Congrats Nette on your fine win.
Stanley Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Beautifully written and well deserving on the first place win - congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 9:55 PM
wow, it is truly a sight of beauty, Nette. Congrats on the big win!
Guzzi Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 8:02 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Hamilton Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Nette this beautiful poem blew me away congrats on placing 1st in my contest Beauty Shadow x smile hug
Hunter Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 10:45 AM
I know I've said it before but I'll say it again....you've got a magical pen. Soooo good!
Onat Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:32 AM
Enchantment of a night found in the glide of fairies! Very imaginative as your words come softly down like dust to depict beauty of the moment.Serenely relayed.
Onat Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Enchantment of a night found in the glide of fairies! Very imaginative as your words come softly down like dust to depict beauty of the moment.Serenely relayed.
Mohammed Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 1:12 AM
Dreamy and beautifully woven imagery dear Nette. Enjoyed perusing your poem tonight my friend. Big hugs
Sivey Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 9:46 PM
This is a phenomenal write, a truly wondrous write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening Nette! What a brilliant piece, you have written a superior poem here! Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Very poetic work that you have wowen..Enjoyed reeading htis one today..Thanks for the visit..SAra
Tacito Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Incredibly blissful & charming it its gentle foundations. This was beautifully expressed, as always...
Manassian Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Lovely....sky's brocade....dreamy. You made this form seem easy, my dear....I'm impressed...Hugs
Datu Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Enchanted by the magical spell of your imagination. And that 's what makes poetry beautiful especially when exploring the loveliness of a froest of night. Metaphors done so gracefully!
Williams Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 12:05 PM
Nette an excellent write which I love...David
Hamilton Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 11:57 AM
beautiful Nette I love this added bonus it is a villanelle great write Shadow x smile hug
Andresen Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 10:54 AM
- What a beautiful gem you share with me in your poem today, Nette !!! - Just beautiful !!!! - I wish you a magic day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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