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Beauty of Light

We jumped for joy in the twilight as the suns fragile rays crept Along the ground towards us We pursued the light and forbade the darkness For fear of the dark and unknown laid dormant inside us Ready to explode at the smallest sliver of darkness We ran from dark and embraced the light.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 9:11:00 AM

Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/2/2015 12:44:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning awesome write Secrets!

Skat A

Date: 3/1/2015 7:58:00 PM

Secrets, CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~

Darlene Gifford

Date: 8/31/2014 2:34:00 PM

Hi, I liked your poem about the light. The light that guides my path is Jesus, and He chases away the darkness when we embrace Him. :)

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 12/20/2014 4:33:00 AM

im glad youve found that light, some people still struggle to see it. :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/11/2014 6:48:00 AM

I really love the structure of your poem; just like my verses! I also like the spiritual color of your piece! ^_^

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/12/2014 3:53:00 AM

Welcome! ^_^

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/11/2014 7:12:00 AM

Thank you very much! :)

Princess Xia

Date: 8/10/2014 4:33:00 PM

Nice write, it is sweet

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/13/2014 3:13:00 AM

Thanks

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/10/2014 9:04:00 AM

An excellent decision. I enjoyed walking in your light.

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/10/2014 9:06:00 AM

Lol,thanks

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/10/2014 6:56:00 AM

Really makes a good write done well Talicia... Move more in the light... Verlena

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/10/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thanks

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/9/2014 11:42:00 AM

It DOES make sense. You were developing a thought and image... And it was well done.

Secrets Inyoureyes

Date: 8/7/2014 6:32:00 AM

I know,I know it doesn't make sense! I'm just writing whatever I think of.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/11/2014 6:22:00 AM

Hi Talicia. That's how I started writing poetry. Poetry is like painting; it may not make sense to the painter, but creates many expressions in shape and color. That's why I love poetry! ^_^

Craig Glenister
Date: 8/7/2014 6:35:00 AM

Makes sense to me..keep at it Talicia