Secrets Inyoureyes Poet I do not know?

Beauty of Light

We jumped for joy in the twilight as the suns fragile rays crept
Along the ground towards us 
We pursued the light and forbade the darkness
For fear of the dark and unknown laid dormant inside us
Ready to explode at the smallest sliver of darkness
We ran from dark and embraced the light.

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Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2017 at 9:11 AM Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 2, 2015 at 12:44 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Secrets!

Skat A March 1, 2015 at 7:58 PM Secrets, CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~

Darlene Gifford August 31, 2014 at 2:34 PM Hi, I liked your poem about the light. The light that guides my path is Jesus, and He chases away the darkness when we embrace Him. :) Secrets Inyoureyes December 20, 2014 at 4:33 AM im glad youve found that light, some people still struggle to see it. :)

Teddy Kimathi August 11, 2014 at 6:48 AM I really love the structure of your poem; just like my verses! I also like the spiritual color of your piece! ^_^ Teddy Kimathi August 12, 2014 at 3:53 AM Welcome! ^_^ Secrets Inyoureyes August 11, 2014 at 7:12 AM Thank you very much! :)

Princess Xia August 10, 2014 at 4:33 PM Nice write, it is sweet Secrets Inyoureyes August 13, 2014 at 3:13 AM Thanks

Richard Lamoureux August 10, 2014 at 9:04 AM An excellent decision. I enjoyed walking in your light. Secrets Inyoureyes August 10, 2014 at 9:06 AM Lol,thanks

Verlena S. Walker August 10, 2014 at 6:56 AM Really makes a good write done well Talicia... Move more in the light... Verlena Secrets Inyoureyes August 10, 2014 at 7:11 AM Thanks

Carol Eastman August 9, 2014 at 11:42 AM It DOES make sense. You were developing a thought and image... And it was well done.

Secrets Inyoureyes August 7, 2014 at 6:32 AM I know,I know it doesn't make sense! I'm just writing whatever I think of. Teddy Kimathi August 11, 2014 at 6:22 AM Hi Talicia. That's how I started writing poetry. Poetry is like painting; it may not make sense to the painter, but creates many expressions in shape and color. That's why I love poetry! ^_^ Craig Glenister August 7, 2014 at 6:35 AM Makes sense to me..keep at it Talicia