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Beauty of Light

We jumped for joy in the twilight as the suns fragile rays crept
Along the ground towards us 
We pursued the light and forbade the darkness
For fear of the dark and unknown laid dormant inside us
Ready to explode at the smallest sliver of darkness
We ran from dark and embraced the light.

Copyright © Secrets Inyoureyes | Year Posted 2014

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/23/2017 9:11:00 AM Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/2/2015 12:44:00 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Secrets! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/1/2015 7:58:00 PM Secrets, CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~ Login to Reply

Darlene Gifford Date: 8/31/2014 2:34:00 PM Hi, I liked your poem about the light. The light that guides my path is Jesus, and He chases away the darkness when we embrace Him. :) Login to Reply Secrets Inyoureyes Date: 12/20/2014 4:33:00 AM im glad youve found that light, some people still struggle to see it. :)

Teddy Kimathi Date: 8/11/2014 6:48:00 AM I really love the structure of your poem; just like my verses! I also like the spiritual color of your piece! ^_^ Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 8/12/2014 3:53:00 AM Welcome! ^_^ Secrets Inyoureyes Date: 8/11/2014 7:12:00 AM Thank you very much! :)

Princess Xia Date: 8/10/2014 4:33:00 PM Nice write, it is sweet Login to Reply Secrets Inyoureyes Date: 8/13/2014 3:13:00 AM Thanks

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/10/2014 9:04:00 AM An excellent decision. I enjoyed walking in your light. Login to Reply Secrets Inyoureyes Date: 8/10/2014 9:06:00 AM Lol,thanks

Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/10/2014 6:56:00 AM Really makes a good write done well Talicia... Move more in the light... Verlena Login to Reply Secrets Inyoureyes Date: 8/10/2014 7:11:00 AM Thanks

Carol Eastman Date: 8/9/2014 11:42:00 AM It DOES make sense. You were developing a thought and image... And it was well done. Login to Reply

Secrets Inyoureyes Date: 8/7/2014 6:32:00 AM I know,I know it doesn't make sense! I'm just writing whatever I think of. Login to Reply Teddy Kimathi Date: 8/11/2014 6:22:00 AM Hi Talicia. That's how I started writing poetry. Poetry is like painting; it may not make sense to the painter, but creates many expressions in shape and color. That's why I love poetry! ^_^ Craig Glenister Date: 8/7/2014 6:35:00 AM Makes sense to me..keep at it Talicia