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Beauty of Fall

Hued Leaves fall, Painting soft Maple daydream, Enchanting image Of chromatic carpet... Russet, yellow, orange Spangles twirling down From golden trees, Breeze unfolds Wonder Dance. 09.13.2021 syllables checked with howmanysyllables.com For Malabika's "MERSE - Beauty of Fall" contest

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Date: 9/26/2021 10:54:00 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Jo , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/26/2021 6:07:00 AM
congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed.
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Date: 9/17/2021 5:43:00 PM
Jo, your poem is so pretty, I lived in Vermont for years and fall became my favorite season. My favorite lovely line in your poem is, " Enchanting image Of chromatic carpet" Perfect.
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:21:00 AM
So much imagery in this and so much colour..to be honest Fall is my least favourite season as it reminds me about death, but your poem is great..
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:16:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Jo, best wishes..
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Date: 9/16/2021 2:48:00 PM
Nice, a very visual poem.
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Date: 9/15/2021 3:21:00 AM
The wonder if Autmn Jo
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Date: 9/14/2021 2:20:00 AM
I've read some wonderful Autumnal poems today and this is another. The beauty of the season is captured beautifully in your verse Jo. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 9/13/2021 11:06:00 PM
Beautiful, A blessing for me. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/13/2021 4:05:00 AM
Glorious writing exalting nature's beauty, dearest, Jo! Hugs xxx
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Date: 9/13/2021 3:46:00 AM
Lovely how you captured the essence of autumn. A magnificent poem Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 9/13/2021 2:32:00 AM
You captured autumn's beauty well Jo. My favourite season without a doubt. Good luck in the contest and hope your week goes well. Tom
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