Joanna Daniel Poet Verse

Beauty of Fall

Hued
Leaves fall,
Painting soft
Maple daydream,
Enchanting image
Of chromatic carpet...

Russet, yellow, orange
Spangles twirling down
From golden trees,
Breeze unfolds
Wonder
Dance.


09.13.2021


syllables checked with howmanysyllables.com

For Malabika's "MERSE - Beauty of Fall" contest

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Eve Roper September 26, 2021 at 10:54 AM Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Jo , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 26, 2021 at 6:07 AM congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed.

Marikate Kingston September 17, 2021 at 5:43 PM Jo, your poem is so pretty, I lived in Vermont for years and fall became my favorite season. My favorite lovely line in your poem is, " Enchanting image Of chromatic carpet" Perfect.

Silent One September 17, 2021 at 7:21 AM So much imagery in this and so much colour..to be honest Fall is my least favourite season as it reminds me about death, but your poem is great..

Joseph May September 17, 2021 at 7:16 AM Beautiful imagery Jo, best wishes..

Mike Bayles September 16, 2021 at 2:48 PM Nice, a very visual poem.

Brian Strand September 15, 2021 at 3:21 AM The wonder if Autmn Jo

Gary Radice September 14, 2021 at 2:20 AM I've read some wonderful Autumnal poems today and this is another. The beauty of the season is captured beautifully in your verse Jo. Cheers - Gary

Regina Mcintosh September 13, 2021 at 11:06 PM Beautiful, A blessing for me. God bless you, Love, Gina

Demetrios Trifiatis September 13, 2021 at 4:05 AM Glorious writing exalting nature's beauty, dearest, Jo! Hugs xxx

Victor Buhagiar September 13, 2021 at 3:46 AM Lovely how you captured the essence of autumn. A magnificent poem Best for a win. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham September 13, 2021 at 2:32 AM You captured autumn's beauty well Jo. My favourite season without a doubt. Good luck in the contest and hope your week goes well. Tom