Beauty of Fall

Wow!
Leaves fall
But not all
Evergreens still
Stand like old portraits
On them, squirrels not same

Running here and there, why?
'They ready for change'
To human says
Beauty of
Lovely
Fall


Syllable count=1-2-3-4-5-6-0-6-5-4-3-2-1
'Beauty of Fall'-Merse poetry contest

10th September 2021
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Ashley Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 7:59 PM
Dear Chathurya, your Autumn imagery is beautiful, especially; "Evergreens still Stand like old portraits" - wow! That is stunning! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gurugoda Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:29 AM
Thank you so much, Susan...Love to hear these comments...
Roper Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Chathurya , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
Gurugoda Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:31 PM
Thank you very much for stopping by Eve....
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala
Gurugoda Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:33 PM
Thanks Malabika...Greatly appreciate your encouragement...
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