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Beauty of Fall

Wow!
Leaves fall
But not all
Evergreens still
Stand like old portraits
On them, squirrels not same

Running here and there, why?
'They ready for change'
To human says
Beauty of
Lovely
Fall


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'Beauty of Fall'-Merse poetry contest

10th September 2021

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Date: 10/23/2021 7:59:00 PM
Dear Chathurya, your Autumn imagery is beautiful, especially; "Evergreens still Stand like old portraits" - wow! That is stunning! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Chathurya Gurugoda
Date: 10/24/2021 12:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan...Love to hear these comments...
Date: 9/26/2021 11:10:00 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Chathurya , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
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Chathurya Gurugoda
Date: 9/26/2021 10:31:00 PM
Thank you very much for stopping by Eve....
Date: 9/26/2021 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala
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Chathurya Gurugoda
Date: 9/26/2021 10:33:00 PM
Thanks Malabika...Greatly appreciate your encouragement...

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