Notes About The Poem

Beauty of Fall

quite
dazzling:
sheer beauty
of autumn woods.
leaves of red and gold
twirl about in the air.

butterflies float under
the bright midday sun
joyful robins
sing summer's
farewell
song


Merse  - Beauty of Fall- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date written: 09/08/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ashley Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 8:25 PM
Dear Edward, your artistic pen captures the dazzle of Fall with elegant beauty. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Edward , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala
Ibeh Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Thanks for my placement and the congratulations, Mala:-) Have a blessed Sunday!
Boreham Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:38 AM
beauty indeed, lovely poem Edward Ibeh :)
Ibeh Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Thank you very much, Paris-Maree:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:34 AM
Delightful! Love butterflies float under the bright midday sun! Blessings, Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:51 PM
This merse verse lends itself to such beautiful poetry like what I am reading here right now! Thanks again for your recent contest too, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 4:20 PM
You're welcome, Andrea:-) Thanks for the wonderful visit and feedback!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Beautifully done. Amazing writing. Love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Thank you so much, Regina:-)
Hankins Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Very nice, Edward. Lovely entry for "Beauty of Fall" contest.
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)
Kingston Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Your poem would make a beautiful song.
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Thank you, Marikate:-)
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:36 AM
You captured autumn well in your verse Edward, my favourite season. Good luck in the contest. New England is on my bucket list. Tom
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Mine as well! Thank you very much, Tom:-)
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:12 AM
WOW! Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem, Edward. Reads like a beautiful ode to autumn in exquisite images. Into my FAVES.
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and FAV, Vijay:-)
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