Beauty of Day's Harvest

Ah, the exotic blend of new spice
and desires on the tip of the tongue,
love's seductive dawning does entice
cinnamon cravings wakened among

thrills of ardent aster in Fall bloom,
whispers and lips in butterfly tease
stoking hearth’s heat in surrendered swoon
harvesting lust with vanilla ease

on eve of Autumn leaves and passion.


Susan Ashley
September 28, 2019
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Callus Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Absolutely rich, lavish...I love the sensual and erotic blend with which you treat this topic, Susan. I am pleased to notice that nowadays you are using alliteration effectively without making it too apparent....technically a significant step in the right direction. (I wonder if publishing a book of poetry is on your wish list!) ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Ashley Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Oh, it’s in the back corner of my mind, but of course now that you mention it, if someday a book of my poetry was published, it would be a wish come true, Paul - not only for me but for my wonderful daughter, Julie too.. who was the first to encouraged me to share my thoughts with the 'world' :) Without her encouragement, I don't think I would have become a poet here at PS.. my observations would still be shyly tucked away in my notebooks :))
Ashley Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Indeed, my dear friend, I have learned and continue to learn from the master. You have been such a guiding force in my growth as a poet since joining PS almost three years ago. Reading your masterworks and receiving your inspiring and positive comments - pointing out the things I got right :) - even when I didn't know it - were the building blocks for my confidence to thrive and take chances with my poetic expression. I am ever appreciative when your shining presence graces my poem and I am ever so grateful to enjoy your golden friendship and encouragement. Thank you truly, my dear friend. My warmest wishes and hugs to you always.. ~Susan
Leiser Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Sumptuous words fill the senses! Enjoyed this very much, Susan! :)
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Your scrumptious comments are truly appreciated, Laura. Thank you for your gracious visit and your wonderful words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 1:26 PM
This is a tasty delight. Better than '31 Flavors' any day, my friend. Best of luck in the contest. Warmest wishes, Gershon
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:22 PM
I’m so happy you enjoyed this little morsel, Gershon. Your comments are delish. Thank you for your kindness, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Warrior Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:04 AM
You harvested most excellently my poetic sis Illum...the Unicornies are pleased lol...bro bro :o)
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Nothing pleases me more than knowing that my bro bro and the Unicorns are pleased.. thank you, my dear brother, for your kindness and light. Love and hugs <3 ~ your sissy, Illum
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Great imagery Susan. Blessings Rick.
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Thank you for your lovely comments and for your kindness, Richard. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Lindley Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 7:52 PM
So very pleasing to read and taste the flavors of this sweet dessert my friend. Imagery to match and a Fall color that gleams into eye and sight of the reader's poetic visions. A fav-- a fine jewel of creative excellence.
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:10 PM
I relish your beautiful comments, my dear friend. It pleases me to know that you enjoyed my poem, Robert, and I’m humbled by the honor of your fav. Thank you for your generous appraisal and kindness. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Adams Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 7:33 PM
you reach out to the senses with this one, great word play and imagery...beautifully penned...enjoyed it :) hugs
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Sandra, indeed, the Fall season stirs my emotions as well as my tastebuds.. I’m so pleased you enjoyed my poem and your lovely comments are treasured. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
One Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 5:39 AM
You did very well with the restrictions and always a great vocabulary...
Ashley Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Thank you for your wonderful and uplifting comments, Silent One. Your golden presence here is always appreciated. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Mcintosh Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 3:34 AM
This is a wonderful poem that should be a winner. God bless you always
Ashley Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Your gracious comment is truly heartens my heart, Regina. Thank you for your wonderful sentiments, they are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Awtry Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 1:01 AM
what deliciously tempting phrasing. :)
Ashley Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 6:07 PM
I'm so pleased that the season's flavors of spice and love enticed you, P.S. It is always so wonderful when you visit and I treasure your beautiful comment. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cunningham Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful verse Susan, Connie discriibed it perfectly, exquisite. Good luck. Tom
Ashley Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Tom, your gracious visit and heartwarming comment brightens my heart and my day. Thank you for your precious thoughts. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Such beauty admired through the senses of the season Susan. Exquisite! : ) xxoo
Ashley Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Indeed, the senses and spices of the Autumn season, which I absolutely love! Thank you, Connie, for being the first to comment, I relish your beautiful insight and your warm sentiments. Warmest wishes always, my dear friend.. ~Susan
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