Beauty Marks

I like mine!
I think they're sublime!
They're round and dark.
The perfect example of a beauty mark.

They're a connection to my family.
'Cause my aunt has the exact marks like me.
It's funny how similiarites can make you feel special.
The moles are natural marks, not from make-up in commercials.

I know for most people this might seem strange.
At times there marks you'd rather rearrange.
But I really like mine!
I think they're sublime!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations Brandee on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Holy Mole-y". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 7:38 AM
great entry , congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:25 PM
great attitude and I bet they are cute! congrats on your fine win, Brandee.Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Congrats Brandee on your big win in Nikko's contest.. awesome as usual... enjoyed on my wedded bliss night as the new Mrs. "Sweetheart"..with luv..ciao..
Devonshire Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 5:50 AM
I'd just as soon not have mine, but I'm glad yours makes you feel 'sublime," Brandee. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Congrats Brandee :) I really liked how you talked your moles in such a positive light here-- congrats on being in my winners' list :) -- nikko :)
Fraser Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 4:27 AM
Many congratulations Brandee on your win in Nikko's contest with this fine poem >> James
Beesley Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 2:34 PM
interesting read galatians 6:17
Hickman Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:11 PM
I am glad that wrote positive about yours and that you are proud of it,,I have seen many beauty marks on women and I have to say to me they are so very special and beautiful,,I also want to Thank You for reading my words, and for leaving yours behind,,and all the best in the contest,,Blessings..Cecil
La France Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:04 PM
I sometimes envy people with a beauty mark, but nowadays, you can buy one!! great poem best of luck~~
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:19 PM
Hey, this is so neat that you talked well of them. I just can't think what to do with this topic! thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 5:28 PM
Nice write for the contest Brandee ..good luck ..with luv..
Nutter Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Great to appreciate and love who you are. Excellent read.
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