Beauty Lost To a Theorem

I once knew a poet named Sathya
      who penned the beauty of Himalaya
             this write was his first poem
             it read just like Theorem,
      this jest sent his ears red like papaya.


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PS: When I was asked to pen a poem on Himalaya(snow mountain range in the South Asia,), being Math oriented I presented a writing which had full of facts ( Temperature, height, length, weight, moisture and this sounded like a Mathematical Theorem). My teacher, in her note was curious to know the beauty I saw in the all facts I presented . My ears turned red and did not know how to react.


            27-Feb-2016
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:46:00 AM
Sathya, I can't believe I'm so late reading every entry on the GLASS COMMUNITY contest list. That's very lame of me, :) I was the one who initiated this contest. But, with the moving and all, I asked my sis to close it for me. I like your placement in this contest. :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
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Date: 3/20/2016 2:56:00 AM
Thanks a Lot.........Hope all is going well...-).....Good Weekend
Date: 3/16/2016 2:09:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Sathya..
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Date: 3/14/2016 3:01:00 PM
many congrats on your win Sathya:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:34:00 AM
Sathya, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 3/1/2016 3:21:00 PM
what a cute story and to put it into this challenge as a limerick. WEll done!!
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Sathya Babu
Date: 3/2/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Andrea......:-)
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