Beauty Lost To a Theorem

I once knew a poet named Sathya
      who penned the beauty of Himalaya
             this write was his first poem
             it read just like Theorem,
      this jest sent his ears red like papaya.


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PS: When I was asked to pen a poem on Himalaya(snow mountain range in the South Asia,), being Math oriented I presented a writing which had full of facts ( Temperature, height, length, weight, moisture and this sounded like a Mathematical Theorem). My teacher, in her note was curious to know the beauty I saw in the all facts I presented . My ears turned red and did not know how to react.


            27-Feb-2016
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March 20, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Sathya, I can't believe I'm so late reading every entry on the GLASS COMMUNITY contest list. That's very lame of me, :) I was the one who initiated this contest. But, with the moving and all, I asked my sis to close it for me. I like your placement in this contest. :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
Babu Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:56 AM
Thanks a Lot.........Hope all is going well...-).....Good Weekend
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 2:09 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Sathya..
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 3:01 PM
many congrats on your win Sathya:-) hugs Jan xx
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March 14, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Sathya, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:21 PM
what a cute story and to put it into this challenge as a limerick. WEll done!!
Babu Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Thanks a Lot Andrea......:-)
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