Beauty In Power

Flash of light in dark,
Fingers outstretched midnight sky;
Electrifying.

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 06/30/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 6:10 PM
The fingers outstretched is nice...Raul
Joseph Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 6:19 AM
ah to watch the fingers of light in the night sky from my bed, beautifully captured...
Al-Riyami Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 11:32 PM
*electrifying*Lovely=)
Penton-Leccese Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 9:26 PM
Wonderfully done honey. Paints a beautiful picture in the readers mind. Lots of Love, Misty
Gorelick Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 4:09 PM
Good one! Clever use of the subject. BG
Hudson Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Thanks for honoring me with 4th place in your Diamonds in the rough contest. You had some really good poetry to judge. -AA
Guzzi Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Thanks Nat for the honor in your contest! I have a storm verse today too! Light & Love
Joseph Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 1:21 PM
wow, really great!
Goff Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 11:07 AM
ooohhhh!!!! lightning storm in the distance! my favorite!!! great haiku! Nathan!! jim
Fraser Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Nathan, your Haiku's get better and better, great write>>James
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