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Beauty In Motion

Beauty in motion as soft as a sigh.
Small luminous wings waltz with a spring breeze.
A delicate creature has caught my eye -
Beauty in motion as soft as a sigh.
Pink and white blossoms are stirring in trees.
They dance as the butterfly flutters by -
Beauty in motion as soft as a sigh.
Small luminous wings waltz with a spring breeze.


For the Butterfly Flutters By Contest of Kelly Deschler

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Tom Cunningham

February 18, 2018 at 7:30 PM

Congratulations on your win Andrea. Tom

Charlie Smith

February 18, 2018 at 9:59 AM

Beautiful work Andrea, congratulations...

Line Gauthier

February 18, 2018 at 9:33 AM

Lovely, Andrea. Superbly done. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Gregory Richard Barden

February 18, 2018 at 9:22 AM

Absolutely gorgeous Triolet, Andrea, and a wonderful flow of imagery and phrasing ... love it! Congrats, Buddy! :-) <3

Maurice Yvonne

October 17, 2014 at 4:40 PM

Belated congratulations on your first place win. Freddie would love this one. He might of seen at the time but I know he loved triolets and this one is spot on.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

June 13, 2014 at 11:32 PM

I don't know if it's just that I don't read nearly enough or WHAAT? BUT Andrea yir' Shitake is gettin' even better than it was. I mean it!

Poet Destroyer A

June 8, 2014 at 8:27 PM

Andrea, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA

Theresa Stephens

June 8, 2014 at 9:50 AM

Hi Andrea, Your poems lovely descriptive words are equally balanced with poetry in motion feelings. Well done deserves a 1st place win. All the best Theresa xx

Theresa Stephens

June 8, 2014 at 9:48 AM

Hi Andrea, Your poems lovely descriptive words are equally balanced with poetry in motion feelings. Well done deserves a 1st place win. All the best Theresa xx

Kiran Bantawa

June 5, 2014 at 7:28 AM

lovely and congrats!

Paul Callus

June 5, 2014 at 2:26 AM

Congrats on your top placing, Andrea! Another form...another superb rendering! Lovely triolet that IS beauty in motion:) // paul

Faye Gibson

June 4, 2014 at 1:24 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, I like sitting up here with you. Beautiful poem as always.

Pandita Sietesantos

June 4, 2014 at 7:16 AM

Hi Andrea, congratulations on your great, big win! Well-deserved!

Elaine George

June 4, 2014 at 6:44 AM

As this is beauty in motion. Many congrat's on this winning Triolet, Andrea. bfn Lainie

Robert Lindley

June 4, 2014 at 6:38 AM

Congrats on your beautiful write and win!!

Mel Merrill

June 4, 2014 at 2:24 AM

Congrats Andrea...life is good for you--two #is...Good for you. I liked this one a lot--short and sweet, but elegant and sweet. Soft as a sigh did it. Nice line :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

June 3, 2014 at 10:03 PM

Superb Andrea ! words very sublime woven so well into this amazing poetic form,, ,congrats on top place win !

Barbara Gorelick

June 3, 2014 at 8:09 PM

Had to sigh when I read it. so beautiful. congrats. BG

Kelly Deschler

June 3, 2014 at 8:04 PM

This was such an elegant and beautiful write, Andrea. The words are so soft, almost like whispers. Congratulations on your first place win!

Joseph May

June 3, 2014 at 7:40 PM

Congrats on a great win Andrea

Monterey Sirak

June 3, 2014 at 5:44 AM

This is a gem! Your images dance delicately like the butterfly.

Connie Marcum Wong

June 3, 2014 at 2:04 AM

For a Triolet to flow like the way this one does, you have to choose just the perfect repeating lines and you certainly have done that in this enchanting poem Andrea! I loved it!