Beauty in a Mist

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Misty roses, red
with pink haze, orange lilies;
Lilac promenade.
Purple pansies on the porch,
dusk soon to carry the torch.

'At last' roses, peach
chocolate cosmos, shrouded,
Yellow daisies smile.
Gardens loved to distraction,
yet hold a strong attraction.

Blue irises, blurred
and black cherry carnations, 
near green hydrangeas.
Subdued belles wear nature's veil
in hued dawn, of small detail.

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Lin Lane

Date: 6/3/2025 12:06:00 PM

Lovely lines you've written to share with us. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/3/2025 9:48:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Lin. Best of wishes. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 6/3/2025 3:01:00 AM

How beautiful , i felt like i walked into a garden so balmy and vibrant and so beautifully blooming with all shades of florals! I especially love the descriptive language and flow and how youv written "Subdued belles wear nature's veil in hued dawn, of small detail." The rhythm and imagery is stunning! Pleasure visiting your page today dear Evelyn! Sending you light always

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/3/2025 11:09:00 AM

Deepest thanks for your touching remarks, dear Ink. It's such a pleasure to know you enjoyed this. Your comments always uplift me. Very best wishes. :)