Beauty in a Mist

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Misty roses, red with pink haze, orange lilies; Lilac promenade. Purple pansies on the porch, dusk soon to carry the torch. 'At last' roses, peach chocolate cosmos, shrouded, Yellow daisies smile. Gardens loved to distraction, yet hold a strong attraction. Blue irises, blurred and black cherry carnations, near green hydrangeas. Subdued belles wear nature's veil in hued dawn, of small detail.

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Lin Lane

Date: 6/3/2025 12:06:00 PM

Lovely lines you've written to share with us. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/3/2025 9:48:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Lin. Best of wishes. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 6/3/2025 3:01:00 AM

How beautiful , i felt like i walked into a garden so balmy and vibrant and so beautifully blooming with all shades of florals! I especially love the descriptive language and flow and how youv written "Subdued belles wear nature's veil in hued dawn, of small detail." The rhythm and imagery is stunning! Pleasure visiting your page today dear Evelyn! Sending you light always

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/3/2025 11:09:00 AM

Deepest thanks for your touching remarks, dear Ink. It's such a pleasure to know you enjoyed this. Your comments always uplift me. Very best wishes. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/2/2025 10:21:00 PM

How I yearn for your gardens and woodland. Since my accident in 2023 I am without a car and I just stay at home and yearn. Lovely poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/3/2025 11:03:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words, dear Victor. I hope this bouquet of colors helped a bit. Best wishes. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/2/2025 7:48:00 PM

I smile as I read the lovely pairings…orange lilies, purple pansies, black cherry carnations!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/2/2025 8:27:00 PM

Have you noticed that I love colors? Lol! Thanks for your lovely comment. :D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2025 4:05:00 PM

- A beautiful bouquet in many wonderful colors, Evelyn :) - I have lilacs "on the menu today " :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/2/2025 8:25:00 PM

It's wonderful news that lilacs are edible, because I have a lilac bush, too! Thank you for the great pleasure of your comment. :) hugs