Beauty In a Fall Afternoon

The winds have turned tempestuous
Gold and scarlet trees whip and sway
Our feet scurry through the leaves
Finding shelter under the porch 
I lose my direction in the clouds
And fill the void with new dreams
Summer's dust is banished...
Cleansed by sound of raindrops

I exhale as you stroke my hair
There is something new in the air
The sound of it comforts me
And I lean back into your arms
You take my hand, and open it
Then lift it up to your lips
With a delicate kiss
Soft as the rain that falls

You lead me away from the view
A sweet honeysuckle fragrance
Is coming through the window
Afternoon slips gently away
And while the sun goes to relax
And is coupled with the moon
We find our lost springtime 
In a fall afternoon



Inspired by Catie's "focus on syllable" contest...
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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 10:01 PM
So beautiful, CAtie. Congrats on your getting thru round one. Are you not a premium member? I would expect to see you with three poems in the finals!!
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March 9, 2011 at 4:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Carrie. Love Carol
Fisher Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Many congrats on your first round success Carrie - luv Janette
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March 6, 2011 at 6:55 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv.. good luck...
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 5:50 PM
just lovely if only we all had more of these memories CONGRAD's on this charmer making it through round 1! You're the bomb! Light & love
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December 14, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Hi Carrie; amazing imagery... I felt the love and tenderness shine through this write. Congrats on your feature! Lay
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Carrie. Love, Carol
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December 13, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Oh Carrie..you are such a great poet. This slips so beautifully off the tongue. Congrats on being featured..BG
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December 13, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Beautiful stuff, Carrie. I just relaxed and enjoyed. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
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December 12, 2010 at 4:55 PM
Congrats Carrie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all with luv my friend...
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Congrats Carrie on another amazing win in the syllables contest with this awesome entry ..enjoy sweet victory once again my friend with lots of luv..
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Congratulations Carrie, on your beautiful poem's placement in the top te3n. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Catie's contest "Focus on Syllables". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, carrie
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November 6, 2010 at 7:51 AM
I can feel the freshness of a fall day in your words, Carrie -- sights, sounds and smells create the perfect mood. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn
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October 14, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Good luck in the contest..I didn't count the syllables but it is very expressive and descriptive...Sara
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 5:13 PM
You have brought out a beauty in this write, Carrie
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October 13, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Hi Carrie I think this is beautiful.Some aspects give a definite picture of Autumn.Yet you have subtly woven in the scenario of two people in love.You leave it to our imagination with your last two lines.Very nice mmm luv June(Sylvia)
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