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                        painting by Lin Lane

beauty among thorns


beauty among thorns
traditional bonsai style~
decades spent in growth

pastel hued petals
blooming amid jaded leaves~
rooted in clay pot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kitchin Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Lin, beautiful poems, so fitting for such a beautiful painting.
Lane Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 2:49 PM
Thank you for both kind comments, Tania.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Painting is beautiful!
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:20 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. 🌸
Gibbons Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:39 AM
Wow I'm mesmerised to see your magnificent work of art I knew deeper talant in you ❤️ luv haiku love " bonsai ~ style " " pastel hued petals " breathtaking beauty. 👏 I applaud ur brilliance in paint and ink such an inspiration you are to me 🥰 " rooted in clay pot " exceptional ending dearest Lin now u know ready drum roll 🥁🥁 what I'm gonna say big smile for me 😊 a BIG FAV ur list getting biggggg on my fav❤️‍🩹 hugzzzzz sweet friend 🫂💋
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:48 AM
You have been such a loyal fan of my poetry and now my paintings, Dotti and for both I thank you profusely. Hugs back to you for your saccharine sweetness. 🌸
Cunningham Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:21 AM
Beautiful painting Lin, bonsai are fascinating. Love the haiku that compliment your artwork. Tom🌹
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so sincerely for your thoughts, Tom. I used to have a few Bonsai and took great pleasure in caring for them. I thought Haiku was🌹 the proper form to use for this painting.
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 7:48 AM
There's something beautiful about thorns, too just as much beauty we find in petals too. How deep is your haiku! And must I even praise your painting skills? Your painting is so clean and has a fresh look. And I bet it takes alot of patience to be able to bring such beauty to life, which I lack. When painting especially! Been a while since Iv painted! I must! I love also the line "blooming amid jaded leaves~" thats so evocative and soulful ~ Pleasure reading Sendin u light always my Poetry Mama 💋
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:00 AM
Your insightful assessments always capture the matte and gloss of my poetry, Ink. I know those are artful terms, but poetry is an art form that we both know as a means to express ourselves. As you said, "... evocative and soulful," but if we don't include those qualities in everything we write/paint, we're not being truthful to show what lies in our heart and mind. And that's not a jaded (in this context) point of view. Such a bonsai does not exist except it did in my vision. Hugs for your light. 🌙
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