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Premiere Contest WinnerBeauty

And in my reverie, I rode a black horse with a long flowing mane,
he carried me through a dappled forest where birds sang me songs;
oh, so lush and green was the grass I wished to rest so he bowed down,
sliding off him I lay in the green, I felt like I was sinking down;
down into the earth and it was cool and I felt I was to be in this place,
in time flowers grew over my resting place, purple, white and blue;
a headstone was engraved with only my name, the name of a poet,
and in another realm I dwell and wander the forest until the hour before dawn.

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June 26, 2017


Lyric/Beauty
Copyright Protected , ID 915726



8 Lines Of Beauty
Rick Parise  

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Hi Broken Wings, so much beauty expressed in only 8 lines. I didn't want it to end... Congratulations on your win! :)
Nusker Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 12:22 AM
A very indulging reverie as described in this beautiful poem. Congrats on your fine win B.W.
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 4:42 AM
wonderful imagery Constance no wonder Rick adored this beauty:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 4:51 PM
Definitely a worthy winner, Constance! The imagery, together with a superb ending, are exactly what the sponsor wanted....8 lines of beauty! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Congrats on your top placements. Great imagination.
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Hamilton Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 8:56 AM
So nice Constance congrats on another fine win!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Constance, this poem became so dreamy at the end. I love where you took it and I can imagine you wandering as a beautiful ghost before dawn. Congrats on a fantastic win!
Roper Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 5:49 PM
Great imagery in this verse, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win ~*
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Congrats!
Daniel Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Beautiful and a very colourful picture, though sad, Constance:)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Beautiful in color and image!
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