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And in my reverie, I rode a black horse with a long flowing mane, he carried me through a dappled forest where birds sang me songs; oh, so lush and green was the grass I wished to rest so he bowed down, sliding off him I lay in the green, I felt like I was sinking down; down into the earth and it was cool and I felt I was to be in this place, in time flowers grew over my resting place, purple, white and blue; a headstone was engraved with only my name, the name of a poet, and in another realm I dwell and wander the forest until the hour before dawn. ____________________ June 26, 2017 Lyric/Beauty Copyright Protected , ID 915726 8 Lines Of Beauty Rick Parise First Place

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Date: 7/26/2017 8:18:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, so much beauty expressed in only 8 lines. I didn't want it to end... Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/20/2017 12:22:00 AM
A very indulging reverie as described in this beautiful poem. Congrats on your fine win B.W.
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Date: 7/18/2017 4:42:00 AM
wonderful imagery Constance no wonder Rick adored this beauty:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:51:00 PM
Definitely a worthy winner, Constance! The imagery, together with a superb ending, are exactly what the sponsor wanted....8 lines of beauty! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/17/2017 10:26:00 AM
Congrats on your top placements. Great imagination.
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Date: 7/17/2017 3:51:00 PM
Date: 7/17/2017 8:56:00 AM
So nice Constance congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 7/16/2017 6:01:00 PM
Constance, this poem became so dreamy at the end. I love where you took it and I can imagine you wandering as a beautiful ghost before dawn. Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 7/16/2017 5:49:00 PM
Great imagery in this verse, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 7/16/2017 5:47:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 6/26/2017 11:31:00 PM
Beautiful and a very colourful picture, though sad, Constance:)
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Date: 6/26/2017 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful in color and image!
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