Beauty

Her fragrance draws me in
like an overflowing field of flowers
Greater Butterfly Orchids fluttering 
about and above

a seduction, two doves
coming together as one
in the solitude of sentient
timid as that may be

she looks, he notices
there's a smile in her eye
where beauty can't be shy
walking to the heartbeat of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Nuwas Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 12:17 AM
I love the romantic style of poetry. Beautiful. :)
Bowring Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 3:23 PM
A very romantic poem and well written. ‘Like an overflowing field of flowers’ - just lovely! Great imagery. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
Labyrinth Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 1:16 PM
buzzzzzzzzzzzzz....
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 2:56 PM
aww TS you havent lost your romantic touch, this is a gem:-) hugs jan xx
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Such a romantic poem just lovely!
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