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- Beautifully Bold - 10

BEAUTIFULLY BOLD

The purple angel facing the sun, so fair to look upon
has a tenacious grip on the moors; it roots secured.
With its head held high, it sways at ease in the breeze;
yet for puncturing thorns, surely, it will be scorned.

Never trained for battles, its winter seed pods rattle
defying each foe, flowering even in spring's white snow.
Its sharp spines bring tears, pricks equals to a sharp spear
to Scotia a dauntless brave, for their land was saved!  
Like a woman defending her virtue, to any, she is bold to face,
yet, the angel as a lion-heart. Her words full of art, 
bloom despite the pain, a greater beauty she attains.
Where ever she may live, this heavenly thistle will thrive.

This humble weed will prosper in the rich faithful soil she seeds
before the sun she and Royal Scotland have plighted their troth
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***Inspired by the painting Thistle in a Field, by Fidelia Bridges  1875

__Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__
January 19, 2015

~~This a late post because I have no internet connection for almost 5 days...
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Davey Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 5:11 AM
You paint a very beautiful image that I can see right before and tell its story with such grace and style...
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Aye, the Scottish or European Thistle scribed with aplomb through your words Olive ~ hugs//James xx
Callus Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:20 AM
I like this picture, and I also like the poem that it inspired! This humble weed reminds me of a humble girl who will prosper wherever she may go, because she is strong in character and full of faith! ~ Hugs // paul
Bocsa Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 4:50 AM
Beautifully written.As an old Scottish said: "Lang may yer lum reek". Have a long life and best career to enchanting us.
Muideen Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 5:01 PM
I love the the pic your write depicts. A very excellent piece........A.M.
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 12:49 PM
wow, this is deliriously good, eloi.. i feel the beauty of a wild-weed flowing through you and me with your striking images!... thanks for enjoying my entry for you.. nakakataba ng puso!.. love and huggs
Turner Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Ingenous, who would have thought a painting of a weed could be expressed so beautifully. A7
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:01 AM
- A great poem, Olive! - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bocsa Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 5:59 AM
Each verse is a humble weed using as soil our soul. Best wishes.Congrat.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:28 AM
Thanks much Ovidiu!!!=`)
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