Beautiful Winter Day

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Blue and white language fills the sky Bringing messages, as to why We are here to observe it all God’s creation brings us a call To look, listen, believe reason For your existence, each season The mountains do stand still Waiting to see your inner will Will you pay attention to it? Will you follow or just omit? The water with destination, Leads to the ocean’s destination Free will, always gives you a choice To ignore it or to rejoice! Heidi Sands 1/23/23 *8 Syllables

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/27/2023 12:19:00 PM

A beautiful write/picture. Hope you are doing better. Have a wonderful weekend..............

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2023 12:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula. I am the same. Bad eye sight , right eye. Waiting on appt with specialist out of state. Thank you my friend :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/25/2023 2:33:00 AM

Beautiful Heidi, rejoice, I love this so much <3 Lovely!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2023 3:07:00 AM

Thank you BJ. I hope you have a nice day :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/24/2023 9:28:00 PM

First line to start the poem is unique. I really admire enjoying Winter. Blessings. Get well soon

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2023 3:06:00 AM

Thank you Anisha. I appreciate your support :)

Michael Tor

Date: 1/24/2023 4:31:00 PM

Im rejoicing Heidi. Hope you are well hon I have been praying for you. How are you doing?

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2023 5:03:00 PM

Great to hear Michael. I am doing ok. Some right eye pain and terrible eyesight. Tired of correcting typos. Doctor thinks it is the brain. I may need to see neurologist. But , I have testing tomorrow for peripheral vision. Thank you! ;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/24/2023 3:38:00 PM

Beautiful photo--and equally splendid images. Enjoy the winter scenery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2023 3:47:00 PM

Thank you Vijay ,:)