Beautiful Wind

The Beautiful Wind

I’ve journeyed far across the plain
 I’ve searched around the world in vain.
 I’ve seen sails billow o’er the sea
 and yet you always hide from me.

I think upon that mistral chill
 as I stood looking down the hill
 reflecting o’er the mighty Rhone
 how close, and yet so far, we’d grown.

I’ve chased you in your wanderlust
 I followed the eluvium dust
 and heard your howling cries at night
 yet never held you in my sight.

When I draw near, away you hurry
 and once or twice I’ve felt your fury
 but how I love your gentle side…
so many times my tears you’ve dried.

I won’t accept that I am wrong
 as I watch clouds dance to your song
 and hear grass swaying to the tune
 just love me back, you big buffoon.

It drives me mad, that much is true
 that I can’t lay my eyes on you.
 O blower, blower of the vane
 Think not that I have gone insane.

I’ll chase you ‘til my final breath
 and then perhaps we’ll meet in death
 where in the heavens I shall find
 you are ugly...ummm
                                ...never mind.

08/29/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/24/2015 1:48:00 PM
Hey Grahamburglar, stopped by for a visit with you. This is a great tribute to the ever elusive and unfathomable Wind. I love the imagery and the rhythm and flow of your poem. I am new to your poems so I look forward to enjoying them - and hope you will find a few moments to visit with me too. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/5/2015 11:13:00 PM
Your well-written poem movingly captures the "personality" of the wind! Janice
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Date: 9/1/2015 11:57:00 PM
Hi Grahamburglar...Beautiful read this morning *******(:heers,
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:08:00 AM
This is a winner. I hope you submitted it for the contest. I love it!!
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Date: 8/30/2015 3:52:00 PM
Haha, thanks njeri. I wrote it because of the contest but didn't submit it. I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.
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