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Beautiful Waters Haiku Suite For Darren White

"beautiful waters"

beautiful waters
live along such open space
gifting treasured pearls
*    *    *    *
whether high or low
tides roll in whispering sounds
mesmerizing guests
*    *    *    *
seagulls fly above
guarding golden sands freely
gliding within winds
*    *    *    *
illumination
reflecting upon waters
gloriously shine

SkyWatcher  -  06-13-17

note
thank you Darren for the inspiration

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Anne-Marie Coreggia Date: 6/15/2017 8:33:00 AM Your haiku suite is music to our ears and your images are breathtaking, Lisa:) Amitiés Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/15/2017 10:13:00 AM Hello Anne-Marie. Oh Thank you Thank you. Your review enhances and graces the entry for Darren. I consider it a gift. I truly bow and respect those who write in this format to which is so unique. Thank you once again. Have a wonderful afternoon. And yes, I will continue to check in and look for new posts by you. Please know I am a fan of your work also.

Debbie Duncan Date: 6/15/2017 12:32:00 AM Love a haiku and your picture too :) Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/15/2017 4:39:00 AM Hello Debbie. Good Morning. Thank you so much. I so respect those who write in this format. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/14/2017 8:43:00 PM I miss not to see the water because it is so peaceful to look at,and I find it to be calming. I have enjoyed your poem. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/15/2017 4:37:00 AM Good Morning Darlene. Thank you very much. I love the ocean and it seems Darren does also. Yes, I find the ocean calming too. Thank you for seeing this for Darren. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Maria Williams Date: 6/14/2017 10:37:00 AM Beautiful perfect Haiku for a lovely person Lisa and from his remarks below he loved it...Maria Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/15/2017 4:36:00 AM Good Morning Maria. Hi. Thank you very much. He did. This was my small way to thank him. I also thank you for your continued generosity. Have a wonderful morning and day. I hope this day finds you well.

Tim Smith Date: 6/13/2017 8:05:00 AM So nice for Darren...I am drawn to the last one. Have a great afternoon. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/13/2017 12:45:00 PM Hello Tim. Good Afternoon. Thank you very much. Thank you also for telling me of the last haiku. I appreciate that. Never do I take your generosity lightly. Have a wonderful rest of the afternoon. I will see you on your page.

Chris Green Date: 6/13/2017 7:15:00 AM Such a soft and alluring poetic offering my friend and your inspiration is definitely someone who inspires many. This was beautiful and such a smile producing piece. Really nicely done Lisa. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/13/2017 12:48:00 PM Hello Mr. Chris. Top of The Afternoon. Darren does inspire many and he truly inspires me continuously. Thank you Chris for your generosity. I truly bow to those who write in this format that is so unique. I'll keep practicing. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.

Darren White Date: 6/13/2017 5:11:00 AM owww Lisa, these are beautiful, stunning. The alliteration, the imagery, everything is more than it should be. Thank you for thanking me for giving you inspiration, even though what I said was far less (even plain tbh) than the brilliancy you show me here. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/13/2017 5:26:00 AM He He He. Hello Penguin. It is I who thank you for you energized me this morning. Honestly you did. I hope this came out ok. I'm still trying to practice this format to which is so specialized. I'm working on it and will continue to. Have a wonderful afternoon. I will see you on your page. PS: the attached image is an image from RI.

White Wolf Date: 6/13/2017 4:50:00 AM These are brilliant, Lisa! 4 of the best haikus I've read! And yes, Duir is an inspiration to us all! Absolutely lovely Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 6/13/2017 5:07:00 AM Oh my goodness. Good Evening White Wolf. How I wish. I sneak in once in a while this form with practicing. Thank you very much. I truly have such respect and bow to those who write in this format. Honestly. Words can not express my appreciation for such generosity. Thank you Thank you. I agree that Darren is an inspiration. Please know I I am a fan of your work as well. Honestly. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.