Beautiful Waters Haiku Suite For Darren White

"beautiful waters"
beautiful waters live along such open space gifting treasured pearls
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whether high or low tides roll in whispering sounds mesmerizing guests
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seagulls fly above guarding golden sands freely gliding within winds
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illumination reflecting upon waters gloriously shine
SkyWatcher - 06-13-17
note thank you Darren for the inspiration

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Date: 6/15/2017 8:33:00 AM
Your haiku suite is music to our ears and your images are breathtaking, Lisa:) Amitiés
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/15/2017 10:13:00 AM
Hello Anne-Marie. Oh Thank you Thank you. Your review enhances and graces the entry for Darren. I consider it a gift. I truly bow and respect those who write in this format to which is so unique. Thank you once again. Have a wonderful afternoon. And yes, I will continue to check in and look for new posts by you. Please know I am a fan of your work also.
Date: 6/15/2017 12:32:00 AM
Love a haiku and your picture too :)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/15/2017 4:39:00 AM
Hello Debbie. Good Morning. Thank you so much. I so respect those who write in this format. Have a wonderful morning and day.
Date: 6/14/2017 8:43:00 PM
I miss not to see the water because it is so peaceful to look at,and I find it to be calming. I have enjoyed your poem.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/15/2017 4:37:00 AM
Good Morning Darlene. Thank you very much. I love the ocean and it seems Darren does also. Yes, I find the ocean calming too. Thank you for seeing this for Darren. Have a wonderful morning and day.
Date: 6/14/2017 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful perfect Haiku for a lovely person Lisa and from his remarks below he loved it...Maria
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Date: 6/15/2017 4:36:00 AM
Good Morning Maria. Hi. Thank you very much. He did. This was my small way to thank him. I also thank you for your continued generosity. Have a wonderful morning and day. I hope this day finds you well.
Date: 6/13/2017 8:05:00 AM
So nice for Darren...I am drawn to the last one. Have a great afternoon.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/13/2017 12:45:00 PM
Hello Tim. Good Afternoon. Thank you very much. Thank you also for telling me of the last haiku. I appreciate that. Never do I take your generosity lightly. Have a wonderful rest of the afternoon. I will see you on your page.
Date: 6/13/2017 7:15:00 AM
Such a soft and alluring poetic offering my friend and your inspiration is definitely someone who inspires many. This was beautiful and such a smile producing piece. Really nicely done Lisa.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/13/2017 12:48:00 PM
Hello Mr. Chris. Top of The Afternoon. Darren does inspire many and he truly inspires me continuously. Thank you Chris for your generosity. I truly bow to those who write in this format that is so unique. I'll keep practicing. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.
Date: 6/13/2017 5:11:00 AM
owww Lisa, these are beautiful, stunning. The alliteration, the imagery, everything is more than it should be. Thank you for thanking me for giving you inspiration, even though what I said was far less (even plain tbh) than the brilliancy you show me here.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/13/2017 5:26:00 AM
He He He. Hello Penguin. It is I who thank you for you energized me this morning. Honestly you did. I hope this came out ok. I'm still trying to practice this format to which is so specialized. I'm working on it and will continue to. Have a wonderful afternoon. I will see you on your page. PS: the attached image is an image from RI.
Date: 6/13/2017 4:50:00 AM
These are brilliant, Lisa! 4 of the best haikus I've read! And yes, Duir is an inspiration to us all! Absolutely lovely
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:07:00 AM
Oh my goodness. Good Evening White Wolf. How I wish. I sneak in once in a while this form with practicing. Thank you very much. I truly have such respect and bow to those who write in this format. Honestly. Words can not express my appreciation for such generosity. Thank you Thank you. I agree that Darren is an inspiration. Please know I I am a fan of your work as well. Honestly. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.
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